Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I agree with your suspect which explains the reason for a short life of air conditioners. Considering the expensive price of the electric appliances, I also hope that manufactures extend the AC life of at least two decades. Best regards, 5971mak
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you always for your kind assist. I learned some useful words like "fabricated" "weary" and realized I had misread "complaints" as "complains". I deeply understand your thoughts on the importance of having clear corporate ethics. I believe that corporate ethics are something that have been built up along with each company's history, so I looked into the world's oldest company and found that it was Kongo Gumi, a Japanese company founded in 578. Thank you again. Have a nice weekend! Best regards, MaiT
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I think that foreign cuisines can become the beginning of globalization in Japan. Although collective harmony is common, palatable dishes can intrude our daily life and expand in our society if the taste is wonderful. For example, not only Tom Yum soup but also Korean pickles, Italian pizzas, and Spanish paella are in Japan nowadays. While having such foreign dishes, people can become familiar with foreign cultures. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I understand that I should avoid using "you" except for strong advice. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I understand the importance of positive writting thet can provide a hopeful prospect to the reader. Best regards, 5971mak
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you always for continued support. I had a summer vacation called "obon" in Japan. As most of us agreed, both blue and green colors represent the innate human need for nature, however I wonder in the future, if human born on the Moon or even Mars, what color could mean nature for them. Have a nice day! Best regards, MaiT
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards. 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I really appreciate your wide and polite vocabulary and wording, which can make my writting skill better. Thank you very much, again. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you for your feedback. You made my sentences much smoother and clearer.
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you for proofreading my text. I am looking forward to taking your lesson gain.
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I reviewed your correction while checking my sentences. As you instructed, I understand the importance of organization and grouping to make persuasive essays. Thank you for detailed and educational sentences. Best regards, 5971mak
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Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. In my view, a lack of literacy skill has become a serious social issue as the reclusive become common in Japan nowadays. Many of them are said to have a problem to learn subjects despite of high school graduation. As smartphone has greatly increased, the young relying on their digital tools too much. As a result, they may lose acquiring essential capabities like communication, literacy, arithmetics, and a lack of resilience. In order to improve current situation of the young, schools should mandate Japanese proficiency test to students so that they can be aware of a lack of literacy in Japanese. As for "scalping", such behavior is now rampant to earn money from innocent individuals. The Japanese government should make a law to protect citizens from the predator. If users accessed online shopping sites like mercari, the company could require the users to upload their ID card such as driver licenses. This decision can expel the greedy scalpers to make the websites peaceful for innocent customers. The internet is very convenient and enjoyable, but anonymity is still a source of troubles and crimes. More regulations should be implemented to secure safety among users. Best regards, 5971mak
