Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. One of the causing misinformation regarding the image of Mt. Fuji is exaggeration of the view from afar. Due to such a picturesque wonderful image, watchers can wrongly perceive the mountain must be a peaceful place. Local authorities should give warning to those who plan to crime. Best regards, 5971mak
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you very much for your kind corrections and suggesting alternatives. They are really helpful for improving my sentences. I am impressed by your advice to use "the language" instead of "English". I would like to be able to use "the language" and make better sentences. I appreciate the words list you recommended. I will read the explanations you gave me again and again and try to acquire better way of writing as you indicated. I am also pleased with your encouragement to do my best on the exam. I am grateful for your warm support. Best regards, atsuko5
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I agree with the young traveling abroad more, particularly when they are flexible to notice the difference of cultures and traditions. Seeing how diverse the world is, they can be equipped with the idea of multiculturism and tolerance to those who have different beliefs. Their experiences can grow the mindset of diversity, which can contribute to make Japan a cosmopolitan country. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. In my opinion, since Toyota has a lot of patents to manufacturing hybrid engine vehicles, they will not be eager to collaborating with other brands to keep their advantages. As far as they can continue profitable operations, they will maintain sole existence for a while. However, as global warming worsens, more investment will be indispensable to invent new technology for reneuable engine cars. The amount of investment can be a huge so that even Toyota may need to belong to a corporate alliance in the future. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. The wisdom "let it go" you mentioned is truely impressive for me. Since I am not familiar with violence in daily life, peace is one of those things we take for granted. Thus, when I face dire conditions like the Gaza conflict and Russian invasion in Ukraine, I have no idea how to solve them. However, from now on, Japan will be involed with diversification on the way to accept economic migrants. Peace is not persistent, so the Japanese government should take actions to expand the idea of multi-cultualism among residents. "let it go" can be critical to sustain Japanese society. Best regards, 5971mak
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you so much for your prompt correction and warm words. I really appreciate them. The word "alleviates" is new word for me, and its specific meaning is more suitable to my writing. I didn't use "when" and "since" correctly this time, so I'll try to choose them carefully. I am writing another composition, so I will send in it in few days. Hope you have a great week. Best regards, mkawa
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Tourism taxes are still limited in Japan. The accommodation tax was first introduced in Tokyo in 2002, followed by Osaka Prefecture (2017), Kyoto City (2018), Kanazawa City (2019), and others. As of April 2024, tourism taxes have been introduced in three prefectures and six cities and towns. However, the Japanese government places tourism industry as essential part of local economy to provide jobs for residents. Considering the importance of creating a sustainable confition for the travel industry, local authorities expand the tax while realizing a fair share between visitors and residents. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you, as always.
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Your sentences to steamline in the middle of my essey are convincing. I am deeply impressed. Thank you!. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Many Japanese people believe that white people, especially Western people, are superior. In addition, Japanese-speaking Caucasians are popular on TV. I think Japanese people praise Japanese-speaking white people because they can't speak English. The Japanese global mindset is often not holistic but limited because many executive boards make a limitation of foreign executives while claiming globalization. As a result, many companies keep it in mind to continue traditional Japanese style, processes, and decision-making that may be outdated in the globlized market. Japanese companies shold increase more affiliation and partnership with foreign companies and investers to survive in their competitive circumstances. Best regards, 591mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. In my view, the Japanese government is lazy to develop school curriculum. Japan is ranked at the 87th in EF EPI survey. (The English Proficiency Index (EF EPI) is a global ranking of English proficiency levels in countries where English is a second language, based on English proficiency surveys of adults in 113 countries and territories around the world.) Despite such terrible condition of school education in Japan, the government is hesitant to reform and update the current school crriculum. Considering the future of the young, the government should take as possible measures as they can. Authority should provide more English communication class from elementary schools with individualized classes. Local government should offer tourist volunteer activity to those students who are interested in communicating in English. At the same time, national government should hold events to select outstanding students while giving them subsidies to go abroad for study and work. Students should be informed with the importance of English proficiency to gain the advantage in the global world. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you, as always.
Thank you, as always.
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that teach me appropriate word choices. Best regards, 5971mak
