Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Since many Japanese companies depend on economic state of the U.S., rapidly increasing amount of trade deficit can be a serious issue. If the deficit would not be reined, the U.S. dollar would devalue and their purchasing power weaken. As a result, the U.S. economy would get seriously harmed, resulting Japanese economy greatly damaged. Given the treaty of Mutual Corporation and Security between the U.S. and Japan, it is rational for the Japanese government to agree with the trade deal. Under the threat of growing China power, America and Japan should collaborate to protect democracy and human rights. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Although I occasionally feel too much Japanese enthusiasm for cleanness in our daily life, it is one of the virtues in our culture. Every time when I hear foreigners confusing at travel spots, English guidance and instructions should be provided more by local authorities. As sharing Japanese culture like being tidy and keeping public places clean, it can make them have more cultural understanding. More English proficiency would be necessary among Japanese residents to boost Japan becoming one of the nations which attract a lot of foreign visitors. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Yes, I agree with the importance of literary education in life since childhood. It is critical for parents to read a book to their child. Such behaviors should be increased when the children are elementary school students. Until they become getting used to read books regularly, their parents should sit beside their children. Reading books can be a source of creativity, imagination, critical-thinking, and having their own opinions. Even if parents are busy, they should make time to read a book to their infants so that the kids could be familiar with reading more books. Currently, the young who don’t read a novel a month occupy two-thirds of the total number of young generation. Such condition is horrible because I am afraid that next generation clearly declines their literacy after all. Parents’ responsibility should be emphasized to change this dangerous circumstance. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I agree with a threat of the AI humanoid robots because of less ethical and profit-centric programs. Usually, the programs in the robots contain the ideas of nature preservation and saving lives. However, human being is said to be second existence harming humans behind mosquitoes. Thus, there is a possibility that AI may regard individuals as a dangerous animal. Consequently, the machines may attempt to dictate people and society to prevent conflicts and wars. In addition, people’s relationships are not always cost-effective such as nepotism. While sharing profits among transactions and deals, many companies sustain their businesses. Pursuing profits only does not match a peaceful atmosphere of society. A family relationship, friendship, and camaraderie are also essential to maintain happiness among people. As long as the AI autonomous agents are loyal to humans, they are beneficial to society. Best regards, 5971mak
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Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you always your kind assist. I knew that the expression "love a person to the moon and back" is from the book "Guess How Much I Love You", I will read it with my daughter with both Japanese and Enlighsh, thank you! Speaking of the expression of love, there is a famous old story in Japan, a man said "The moon is beautiful" instead of "I love you". - it's also interesting, isn't it? Thank you again for your kind support. Have a nice day! Best regards, MaiT
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for your assist again. In this trial, I learned the effectively use of "while" at the beginning of a sentence to let the reader know that I intend to develop an argument using a paradox. Looking forward do your assist again. Have a nice week! Best regards, MaiT
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I agree that young workers tend to hide their chronic pains frequently because they hope to be regarded as essential staff in their workplaces. However, due to making their health issues confidential, they have difficulty meeting their doctors since thay hesitate to take paid day off for visiting clinics. Furthermore, as they are just still because of their pains, their colleagues may misunderstand they are lazy. While making a balance with workers' privacy, there is still difficulty managing health condition of their subordinates. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you as always for your kind assist. Starting the sentence is always difficult but I have leaned some tips from your assist in the second paragraph. Now I am also looking forward to your small comments on my content. Looking forward to your next assist again. Have a nice weekend! Best regards, Mai
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for the message. I respect your professionalism as being a English writing trainer. In any language, correcting someone's text while respecting their intentions require great effort. I believe all teachers have their own belief but I like the way you chose. Here is just an excuse but the current plan is something that I cannot change due to company's financial support, and there is no option to contact teachers directly. However, as I discovered in the comments section here recently, it may be that I'm just unaware of the feature, so if I find it I'll let you know. Thank you always. Best regards, MaiT
