Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. As long as users utilize AI wisely, the advanced technology can help them accelerate work-efficiency. However, many young adults heavily rely on its shortcut and seem to slack in many cases. While saving cost and time, they should be cautious for weakening their documentation skill. They should focus on something that they can continue being interested in. As a result, they should set goals that they want to become while they can have spare time. Since there is a labor shortage, I think it would be disadvantageous for them to keep changing jobs. By the way, today, the Japanese government announced to reform current immigration policy to establish Japanese version of green-card for economic migrants. Although the processing fee and procedures become having more steps, the revised system allow them to become residents in Japan. On the other hand, the government should boost diversity in our society. As we keep homogenous atmosphere, it will alienate newcomers from Japan. Accepting diversity and elevating tolerance will be essential for us to create diversified society that is indispensable for sustaining our future. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you for detailed feedback. It's very helpful for me that you suggested alternative words such as valuable, identify and gathering.
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I understand the expression "72 hours" in emergency contexts. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Yes, I know the danger of LED lights directly attached to the old fluorescent light socket because the appliance has electric circuit for traditional fluorescent lights. LED lights can elevate the circuit temperature that may cause fire. Although advertisement of LED lights showcases its notification on flyers and websites, people doesn't seem to understand the message because many people are not familiar with the mechanism of electric circuit. Authorities and home appliance companies should instruct to replace new light socket for LED lights when customers change to LED lights. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you for your hard work!! You always give me a lot of comments in short time. You're my favorite tutor that's why. I will try to choose clearer words and avoid to use negative sentences next time. Have a good day!!!
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I should have written that I think that vulnerable people are being eliminated by dying "before" age 85. I mean that the vulnerables must have gotten natural selection. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. In my view, due to skyrocketing number of parcels, it is common for Amazon to face a lack of delivery workers. To make ends meet between demand and supply, customers collaboration will be essential. Currently, most community have convenience stores, so customers also can pick up their boxes at the stores as much as possible. More collaboration with receipients should be emphasized to compensate for the labor shortage in delivery businesses. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
