Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Due to scorching days, many Japanese citizens bring a handheld fun and a parasol nowadays. These items are now essential to stay in good health during summer in Japan. On the other hand, foreign travelers frequently don't take these countermeasures. To alleviate sweltering heat atmosphere, Kyoto station started spraying water mist to cool down visitors at central bus stop station in front of there. When people are crowded, this spraying mist can be effective to those who don't take actions. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Since many addictive beverage companies and processed food shops, a number of customers indulge these delicious flavors and tastes that are difficulty of self-repression. Continuous and repeated notification would be necessary to prevent malnutrition and poor diet. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. According to notification sites of Minato Ward, English classes at kindergartens have been expanded as the new style which provides the communication class every other day by native English speakers in this fiscal year. Through daily English conversation, the local authority expects children grow their English communication skill from the early age. As for excursion trip for Singapore, since the travel cost was too expensive last year, the local governments didn’t decide to continue it yet. As some people argue that such high cost may bring widening disparity between children because only rich families can allow children to participate in the special programs. Although the price of the program should be reasonable like home-stay trips, I hope that the Ward would continue the program. The opportunity visiting English spoken nations can bring a variety of culture shock to kindergarten children, which become a strong motivation to learn English by themselves. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. In my view, a serious reduction of offices clearly drove female students to big cities for better employment. As a result, many countryside regions are occupied by elderly parents with middle-age sons. To solve a lack of brides, neighborhood associations and local authorities held traveling abroad for the unmarried men to meet foreign local women through arranged marriage party. As the state of unmarried women shortage doesn’t change, the international marriage is important opportunities to get married. On the other hand, some people argue that such travel finding a partner is some kind of maidservant trade due to limited mutual understanding. Many Japanese host families expect the female partners to focus on giving birth and looking after husband’s elderly parents. As long as the wives are obedient, they are recognized as a member of the family. While globalization by the international marriage goes on because few Japanese girls in rural areas, local authority should strive elevating diversity and tolerance for acceptance of newlyweds from abroad. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Currently, many corporations are struggling with a serious lack of labor in Japan. Some people argue that we should have more robots, but the usefulness of the machines would be limited as simple tasks. Although AI produces humanoid robots, many people may feel eerie due to un-natural flow of responses in conversations. In particular, a lack of sympathy between comments on AI is a significant difference from human interaction. As long as science could reveal what makes sympathy over people, I believe that human labor is essential supported by robot assistance. Our government should accept more skilled foreign workers in hospitality businesses. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Currently, as online format becomes popular, publishers tend to choose a hybrid books to catch readers' attention. While book shops decrease year after year, paper versions are still available online. Even though digital publishing are easier, I think that many readers demand hybrid books that are useful to us. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Rapid aging of Japan brings a pile of tasks which we have to overcome, but the transition increases diversity and tolerance in our homogeneous atmosphere as well. To raise healthy aging, as the Japanese government repeatedly appeal the importance of healthy meals, restaurants and canteens create healthier food. While elevation of the healthy eating, the new norm expands more tolerance over citizens. Little by little, there is a growing trend of people eating what they want to eat and drink nowadays. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Urban life can be exciting with a lot of activities, though people's daily life is commonly too busy and messy. Thus, urban dwellers may need an oasis-like place such as art cafe to have a break while handling a lot of things to do. The new style of Starbucks can contribute to increasing a calm situation in noisy and crowded city life. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Since random goods machines are everywhere sucha as grocery stores and shopping malls, many children beg a play to their parents. In addition, its spending is relatively low so that many adults tend to pamper their children. Such situation may lead to a waste of money in daily life, from the educational point of view, parents should make a rule that allows ones to play the random goods. I understand abuse of "will" in my sentences. Except for a definite future and one's intention, I should have limit the usage of "will." Best regards, 5971mak
