Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I understand that I should have mentioned about long-term commitment. As for this topic, currently, the Japanese government subsidizes the "Regional Revitalization Cooperation Team project" nationwide in Japan. This project has a policy to actively welcome young people from outside the region in rural areas where depopulation and aging are progressing rapidly, to have them carry out regional cooperation activities, and to maintain and strengthen regional power while responding to the needs of urban residents who are eager to live in the region and contribute to the local community. This can be a beneficial opportunity for young people who do not have the funds to open their own store in the urban cities. The local municipalities provide their tenant spaces, accomodations, and camaraderie with local residents to the newcomers. The governments expect that some of the participants in this program may hope long-term commitment voluntarily. Depopulation in rural areas is a critical issue in Japan nowadays. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I agree with the huge demand of AI machines in agriculture and elderly care businesses. Since these industries contain a lot of strenuous manual tasks, the young don't prefer working in the fields. In particular, according to my friends who work as farmers aged 50 years old, current many farmers discourage their children to inherit their family bisiness because of low wages with long working hours. Although agricultural machines are already available, a chain of work tasks still persists stressful working situations. Even though AI machines will be available, they are powerless and useless against drastic deterioration of weather conditions like droughts and global warming. As for nursing care industry, some people claim introducing AI tools to mitigate workers physical tasks, but the effectiveness is limited due to pervasion of dementia. The disease demands care givers catching atmospheres of care service users. I don't think that AI can grasp the eerie atmosphere of the excited users come from cognitive impairment and loss of self-repression. In these two fields, especially, human labor seems to be essential for maintenounce even if AI tools and robots develop. Therefore, I believe that internationalization and diversification of Japanese society will be indispensable to sustain while accepting economic migrants as a part of communities. They should not be treated as replaceable parts for businesses. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you for the corrections. I'll try to learn how to write in casual format.
Thank you very much. I learned new phrases, such as "the other way around."
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I agree with the elevation of infectious diseases such as flu and hand, foot, and mouth disease. Since people refrained from going out during the COVID-19 pandemic, they missed opportunities of these infections and herd immunity is said to decline. Therefore, we should pay attention to the virus infections while practicing preventable behaviors in daily life. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I agree with the importance of having a passion to do. As long as ones maintain strong motivations, they can delay the onset of aging. Therefore, I believe that it is necessary for them to find worth doing. I also want to follow him to make the future better for next generation. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Dear SaraRoseNY, You wrote "The last revision is more definitive and suitable for this context." That's right! I couldn't write in any other way even though I thought that "after all, I don't know what is right to do." sounded childish and stupid. Also, I like the word"notably". It's a good word to use in a sentence instead of "especially" or "particularly." Thank you so much for all. Bye for now Yoko
Dear SaraRoseNY Hello, again. Thank you for the corrections. I'm glad that you revised my errors. Thank you very much. from Lavender
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. I appreciate for your kind words regarding Japanese cuisine. Since rice is the most familiar food to us, many chefs developed a variety of rice dishes. Thanks to the variety, we enjoy different tastes and flavors with rice. I am grateful for the natural gift of rice. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. In the last weekend, I visited Kyoto for my business. Since it was a weekend, there was a huge number of travellers, I was so paled that I could not find ticket gate at the time I took off my train at Kyoto station. I slowly went into large crowd to the spot where there should be the gate. I understood that several layers of people were waiting their turns in front of the gate. It takes ten minutes for me to pass through it and I thought I should leave from the heavy crowds anyway. I avoid using busses and subways because they had to be a mess; instead I walked for twenty minutes to the accommodation that I reserved. My accommodation was relatively away from Kyoto station, but there were still many international travelers around there. The surrounding circumstances had to be noisy and terrible congestion along streets. Therefore I avoided going out and stayed with relax at the hotel, and then I took a walk surrounding places in the early in the morning of the next day with a peaceful situation. After having enjoyed the atmosphere of my hometown, I visited an office for my work for a whole day until five o’clock in the evening. When I went out the office, I saw a lot of people who enjoyed travelling despite of Sunday evening. On my return way to Kyoto station, I carefully chose the routes that were not crowded to go without using common roads since I know Kyoto well. I smoothly took on my return train without congestion and was relieved when I sat my seat on the train. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
