Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you for your feedback with suggestions for more natural sentences! They are helpful to improve my writing skill.
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Usually, I don't drink alcohol beverages. However, the New Year day is the special day for my family, so I drank two glasses of sake. My family prefer traditional version of osechi dishes. Although there are a variety of modern osechi sets, we don't hope to change our preference. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Today's TV news broadcasted a wild bear loitered in a residential area and stay beneath floor for several hours in Akita prefecture where snow already covers. In our local place, local authority request hunters to shoot blank shots to expel wild bears which may approach to human teritorry. "Wild bear" is the symbolic word to express this year. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I understand that I should not have written my last sentence that will discourage readers to agree with my essay. I will write essay within the scope of what should be done by local authority for public safety. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I agree with negative influence of giant multinational corporations. Under the market principles, if big companies enjoy free competition, small businesses in remote areas will be davastated. There are so many local shopping street that are occupied with closed and shuttered shops nowadays. To stop devastation of local economy, the government should regurate capital investments by foreign companies. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you for polishing my writing!
