Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. There are still a lot of conflict and regional wars around the world. Our next generation should be taught how wars are cruel and devastating in our daily life. While elevating awareness of the importance for the prevention, adults should display appropriate photos and videos to their children to create more peaceful world. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
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Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Although the internet has advantages and disadvantages, AI instructions must be an advantage for the young. Active young individuals can gather knowledge and information independently thanks to development of AI function. They can learn by themselves and eager to have productive advices from their teachers. Such situations are beneficial for society, but those who prefer traditional instruction may be confused to adapting new circumstance. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I understand that “lifeline”, “fun time”, and “happy” can be part of Japanese English. I will pay attention to using these words and phrase correctly. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. The world of Mr. Hayao Miyazaki is so special and immpressive that his directing works can provide a variety of empathy, awareness, courage, and resolution to stop wars. I am always impressed by his each movie with strong messages. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Yes, Mr. Shigeo Nagashima is the most famous baseball player and attracted many people regardless of his fun. Even those who support his opponent were his fans because he was very cheerful and bright like Sun. Those who watched his elegant baseball plays were fascinated without knowing it. When he quitted baseball as a player, the ceremony was broadcasted and many people cried. After he started working as a director to instruct Tokyo Yomiuri Giants, he was struggling to win baseball tournaments. Since he was one of the gifted with moderate training, he has difficulty giving his team players practical advices. As a result, despite a lot of expectation to him for winning games, his team was sluggish. Although he could have a lot of talented players, team work was not realized and many players played for standing alone plays. TV baseball live channel frequently show that Mr. Nagashima was getting angry while he was slamming his hat on a bench. Due to such stressful situation, he suffered from arrhythmia(paroxysmal atrial fibrillation) that caused stroke in later his life. As a director, he could not become a respectable one because of a lack of slump during his player time. After he suffered from stroke with right hemiparesis, he was regarded as a person who challenged his handicap. While having difficulty in walking, he was out with slugging his right lower limb and immobilized right arm in front of TV cameras at the Giants home stadium. He always showed his happy smile with short comments for his juniors. Many people were encouraged by his daily challenging, which could make him as a person who give in difficulties. As a baseball player, as a baseball team director, and as a handicapped individual, he continuously provided a lot of hope to us. His natural charms can remain in many peoples’ mind after his passing away. Best regards, 5971mak
Dear SaraRoseNY Thank you very much for your correction and interesting message. Moreover, I have to say "I'm so so sorry" I apologize I mistakenly sent you the message to other instructor. Howevr, I am glad because I could read your informative writing, nice sentence style, and your curiosity about baseball, specifically Shigeo Nagashima. Actually, I am astonished with you because you knows very well about him although you are American. I guess you have been living in this counrty and familized Japanese culture. I share what you wrote about him at all. Especially, one thing I focus on his good personality is his positiveness. As you mention, he showed his motivation in his last when he passed away, which made not only family and medical people, also us. I am not a hero like him, I would like give positive impression to my wife, family, freinds and all. This is because I got type 1 diabetes a few years ago, since then, I have shotted insline every before meal, and diet therapy. Sometimes, I feel it a little bardon, but I try to think it my positive motivation given by God. After getting the long term and incurable illness, I decided to restart learning English, and encourage those who struggle with hardship like me. Mixing two elements, I planned to study abroad in Canada. My ongoing goal is to enroll in a public college, and study nurtrition and culinary arts there, off course in English. I would like to creat new menus specifecally for patients. As dishes for them tend not to be tasty, so, I try to serve them, and socialize with them. I hope my little experience will be helpful for people. The reason why I though to make good food for them was, that my wife has been cooking these specific delicous foods using a variety of ingredients, vegitable, Japanese tofu and konnyaku, chicken, seafood, etc. Using her skills and talent, I hope we will contribe to society over there. By chance, Canada provides educational opportunity including internship to those who hope to study during work, aged over 30. I am 55 now, passing over the age too much, but I am luck to find it. This September, my agent will apply for the permisson to a public college in Vancouver, and if I am admitted, I am scheduled to join in the college. I will take my wife to support me, because this is our private project collaborating together. Thank you for your instructions and suggestive sentences. A variety of vocaburay and sentence style I have not seen interest me, such as "seemed fitting for the extraordinary person", courageous effort, momentarily,epitomize, indisputable virtue,consummate professional, keep his cragt in tip-top shape, etc. These new words you used are really easy to absorb, because they are living language that excellent native teacher wrote. Thank you again for giving a chance to stimulate my vocabrary. I am going to submit my writing by requesting you! Sorry for my fault this time. I enjoy your writing, and am glad to feel your nice personaliIty and vibration from this. I hope you will be fine and healthy, weather is instable and rainy in Japan. Have a fantastic day! Best regards, shigeru09291669
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
