Hello SaraRoseNY, Thank you very much for your correction! I really appreciate your explanations and learned a lot from your comments: 1) new vocabulary (taupe”, “overall”, and “stall”) 2)the difference between “grey”and “gray” 3)how to make sentences more natural I have not used the service for a long time since it is quite difficult for me to maintain motivation to learn foreign language where I am only surrounded with Japanese people. But your comments and explanations made me a bit motivated! Thank you very much! They are helpful!! I will probably continue this type of exercise since I am so bad at describing things. :( Have a great afternoon, SaraRoseNY!
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Thank you for your feedback as always. I appreciate your detailed suggestions on how I can utilize hyphenations and your insightful view as well!
My apologies for the late response. Thank you for your detailed explanations and suggestions. I look forward to taking your lesson again.
Thank you very much! I can understand the difference between "sleep' and "fall asleep'.
Thank you for correcting my essay. Your explanations were very detailed and easy to understand. I was surprised to find that you know a lot about Ken Shimura and “Baka Donosama.”
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Dear SaraRoseNY, Happy New Year 2023 I was impressed by your kind and clear advice. I will practice using those words “predict” and “scenario.” I often feel that it’s hard to explain thoughts and emotion in English because of lack of proper words in my mind. And I will practice how to use of the subjunctive mood. It must be helpful. I started to care about grammatical accuracy after I began learning here. Thank you again. May this be a happy and fruitful year. Sincerly Akihiro Okamoto
Hi, SaraRose, how are you? and happy new year. It's beautiful morning of new year's day with blue sky and fresh air here. Thank you for the amendments you made on my submission and the advice is very nice. I appreciate you for the quick response. I can review it while it's fresh. Thank you, I agree to the changes in the second, third, and fourth sentences. Actually, I was not sure about which tense it would be. I wrote present tense in the beginning, and on the second thought I change them into past tense. Eventually, your beautiful explanation makes me understand all. Also, the phrase " keep me busy" makes a perfect sense with your kind explanation. I hope to see you soon again. Bye for now Yoko
Thank you for your great help!
Thank you so much for your detailed and precise explanations. I learned the nuances of 'Furthermore', 'Moreover', 'Additionally' and 'in addition', which I really didn't know. I like the way you changed in my second sentence. It became clearer now. Thank you!
Thank you for correcting my sentences. I was impressed with the sentences you checked. They are simple and beautiful. I will be careful with 2 things you pointed out. 1. Use a variety of words, without using same words 2. how to use “be verb-ing” and “be to” Thank you very much. Have a great day.
Thank you for your detail explanation. It is very helpful not only for improving my skill of English composition but also for digging my understanding about the merit of working from home. I’m looking forward to working with you.
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