Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you always for your kind assist. The corrections I received this time were particularly difficult, and I was painfully aware of my lack of vocabulary for abstract and artistic terms. Thank you for always being patient with my English. Have a nice day! Best regards, MaiT
Dear SaraRoseNY Thank you always for your kind support. I fully agreed your description of "children were indisputably future assets", I expect our goverment truly understand this importance and take immediate action for resolve the root causes of declining birth rate. Thank you again and have a nice week! Best regards, MaiT
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corections that are helpful to me. I understood that I should not have written with critical tone to describe teenagers. I review your correction and brush up my expression. Thank you very much, again. Best regards, 5971mak
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for your assistance. Through this session, I found more interested in expanding my vocabulary. Ig Nobel Prize is well-known award but Novel Prize is renowned award. Something unavoidable has come up. /Competitions are inevitable for many aspects of life. "Uphold" something means maintaing it at a high level. Thank you for this time. Looking forward to your next assistting again. Have a nice week! Best regards, MaiT
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Since many Japanese companies depend on economic state of the U.S., rapidly increasing amount of trade deficit can be a serious issue. If the deficit would not be reined, the U.S. dollar would devalue and their purchasing power weaken. As a result, the U.S. economy would get seriously harmed, resulting Japanese economy greatly damaged. Given the treaty of Mutual Corporation and Security between the U.S. and Japan, it is rational for the Japanese government to agree with the trade deal. Under the threat of growing China power, America and Japan should collaborate to protect democracy and human rights. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Although I occasionally feel too much Japanese enthusiasm for cleanness in our daily life, it is one of the virtues in our culture. Every time when I hear foreigners confusing at travel spots, English guidance and instructions should be provided more by local authorities. As sharing Japanese culture like being tidy and keeping public places clean, it can make them have more cultural understanding. More English proficiency would be necessary among Japanese residents to boost Japan becoming one of the nations which attract a lot of foreign visitors. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Yes, I agree with the importance of literary education in life since childhood. It is critical for parents to read a book to their child. Such behaviors should be increased when the children are elementary school students. Until they become getting used to read books regularly, their parents should sit beside their children. Reading books can be a source of creativity, imagination, critical-thinking, and having their own opinions. Even if parents are busy, they should make time to read a book to their infants so that the kids could be familiar with reading more books. Currently, the young who don’t read a novel a month occupy two-thirds of the total number of young generation. Such condition is horrible because I am afraid that next generation clearly declines their literacy after all. Parents’ responsibility should be emphasized to change this dangerous circumstance. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I agree with a threat of the AI humanoid robots because of less ethical and profit-centric programs. Usually, the programs in the robots contain the ideas of nature preservation and saving lives. However, human being is said to be second existence harming humans behind mosquitoes. Thus, there is a possibility that AI may regard individuals as a dangerous animal. Consequently, the machines may attempt to dictate people and society to prevent conflicts and wars. In addition, people’s relationships are not always cost-effective such as nepotism. While sharing profits among transactions and deals, many companies sustain their businesses. Pursuing profits only does not match a peaceful atmosphere of society. A family relationship, friendship, and camaraderie are also essential to maintain happiness among people. As long as the AI autonomous agents are loyal to humans, they are beneficial to society. Best regards, 5971mak
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Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I agree that young workers tend to hide their chronic pains frequently because they hope to be regarded as essential staff in their workplaces. However, due to making their health issues confidential, they have difficulty meeting their doctors since thay hesitate to take paid day off for visiting clinics. Furthermore, as they are just still because of their pains, their colleagues may misunderstand they are lazy. While making a balance with workers' privacy, there is still difficulty managing health condition of their subordinates. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you as always for your kind assist. Starting the sentence is always difficult but I have leaned some tips from your assist in the second paragraph. Now I am also looking forward to your small comments on my content. Looking forward to your next assist again. Have a nice weekend! Best regards, Mai
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for the message. I respect your professionalism as being a English writing trainer. In any language, correcting someone's text while respecting their intentions require great effort. I believe all teachers have their own belief but I like the way you chose. Here is just an excuse but the current plan is something that I cannot change due to company's financial support, and there is no option to contact teachers directly. However, as I discovered in the comments section here recently, it may be that I'm just unaware of the feature, so if I find it I'll let you know. Thank you always. Best regards, MaiT