Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I always appreciate your concise and accurate advices. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you very much for your corrections and explanations. They are really helpful and stimulate my brain. Even though it might be hard for me to understand all of them at first, I am firmly convinced that I will be able to acquire the usage of neat English words. I am pleased that there were small improvements in my word choices, such as the phrase, “the insufficient average sleep time.” I would like to increase such accurate expressions in my sentences. I will read your corrections and explanations repeatedly. I appreciate your kindness.
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Early bird would be beneficial for elementary school children to have a regular daily life, but parents should pay attention to maintaining daily conversation at breakfast. Since many parents are busy for their daily tasks and students do extracurricular activities in the evening and at night, they have difficulty in having communication at supper, resulting students eating alone. As a result, it is common nowadays that they can talk with their children at breakfast. I think that the gap time gained by waking up early should be used to communicate with their parents. Daily conversation is essential for children's healthy growth. Best regards, 5971mak
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for your detailed advice! I learned not only English writing skills, but also historical facts, such as the purpose of using maggots. I used "able" instead of "could" because of your advice the other day, and I got the already negated "unable" this time. I heard the phrase "in the grand scheme of things" for the first time, and it sounds very useful. Finally, "reflect" is also concise and suitable word in this context, so I'll choose it in the next composition. I really appreciate your kind advice again. Hope your great weekend. Best regards, mkawa
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Yes, I agree with the negative aspects of online TV and videos. While focusing on their interests via smartphones, many of them will take it for granted that their thoughts and mindset are social standards. Alienating themselves from those who have different ideas, they naturally have difficulty having sympathy and compassion. Due to its convenience and comfortableness, many young adults are addicted to the digital products unintentionally. Therefore, parents and teachers should give warnings to children and young adults about this drawback of on-demand contents. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you, as always.
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Yes, everbody can raise their performance and skills thanks to support from surounding people. Even those who are greatly talented should have a mindset of modest, and it is essential for them to have appreciation to team mates and staff. Mr. Otani have repeatedly shown gratitude to his team mates and staff. Contararily, Mr. Mizuhara's behavior was rude and arrogant, so it is rationale for the court to convict harsh sentence in addition to the prosecutor's recommendation. No one can live and grow by oneself, so everyone should keep it in mind to have a mindset of thankfullness to friends, family, co-workers, and those who support him/her. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Yes, a lot of talented students prefer going to Tokyo to enter prestigious universities for their future. Still, corporate headquarters mostly located in the capital, so the young can have more possibility to finding lucrative jobs. Capitalism must conglomerate big companies to raise more profits while implementing collaboration among those companies. Such economic natural force should be regulated by the governmental instruction in case of Tokyo megalopolice. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you, as always.
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for collections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
