Thank you for taking my point and correcting my entry.
Thank you for your always very appropriate guidance. The expressions in your comments are also very helpful.
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for your advice and correction. I leant a lot again. The word and expression "adorn" and "A is drawn to B" were new for me, and I'll try to use them! By the way, when I use the words "numerous" and "empower", which I learnt by you, in my conversation lesson today, the tutor said " very good"! Learning words in this writing lessons and using words in conversation lessons are good cycles to gain expression! Thank you so much again!!! Now I'm preparing next composition!! Best regards, Mkawa
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for correcting my writing again. I understand your message, and I’ll change the time of my entry from a morning opening to other times in order not to disturb others. I know your corrections are hard to reserve because you're very popular! I will also try to write my diary longer. I think I will continue my writing until at least the end of November. After that, I focus on my exam studies. Everyone likes your corrections, including me! Kind regards, wako38
Regarding my entry, I thought I did not choose my words well. Thank you for your guidance.
Dear Sara RoseNY, Thank you for your kind advice. Your encouragement always uplifts my spirit. I learnt the necessity and effect of glue words. And I'll try to use words that you recommended me such as "explore" and "issue" in my next composition. By the way, I'd like to apologize for very short message when I send my composition. I really wanted to submit my writing to you as soon as possible at that time!! I will send another composition soon! Best regards, Mkawa
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for correcting my writing again. It’s really nice weather today. Have a nice day! Kind regards, wako38
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for correcting my writing again. Hope you have a wonderful day. Kind regards, wako38
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you for your help! I look forward to take your proofreading again.
I think your choice of words is really great. It is very helpful.
Each sentence you modified gives me a clear image of the scene. It is very helpful for me.
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for correcting my writing again. You always help me. I’ll try to keep writing my English diary for now. Kind regards, wako38
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for correcting my writing again. I’ll keep studying English to go to London! Have a nice day. Kind regards, wako38
When I compare my own sentences with the corrected sentences, I still think my sentences are awkward. I will review carefully. Thank you very much.
