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Thanks to you, I've always been careful about choosing words and avoiding repetitive expressions. The guidance on how to choose between "the" and "this" was also very helpful. I keep making the same mistakes over and over again, but I'd like to review my lessons and try to reduce the number of mistakes.
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I mean that comprehensive assessment is able to be done by human intervention. I don't think that computers are proficient to judge individuals' motivation and ethics which are essential to evaluate each students. Having constructive perspective, positive thinkng, and critical thinking for controversial issues is preferable attitude in education. Regarding these point of view, human instruction is critical to raise students' performance. Best regards 5971mak.
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Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for fixing what I wrote to be more natural. Speaking of rice and honey, as you said, they contain a lot of sugar. Actually, I have high cholesterol and I should cut back sugar! I’ll write about my taking steps in order to cut back sugar these days. See you soon. Best regards, wako38
Dear Ms. SaraRoseNY Thank you for proofreading! The alternative explanations that you suggested were so useful, and expanded my expression. I really appreciate your advices. I'll avoid repetitive phrases, and try to increase my vocabulary!! I'll submit another composition soon! Best regards, Mkawa
Teacher SaraRoseNY I understand the usefulness of the balanced presentation. Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards 5971mak.
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Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards 5971mak.
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Dear Ms. SaraRoseNY Thank you for your amazing proofreading and kind messages! I was really impressed by them. Your correction is like a magic! I want to write a sophisticated composition like yours. I will practice more!!! I'll submit another composition soon!
I like this type of lesson! That's fun and your advice is always great!
