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Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I agree that accepting foreigners is a controversial issue that is a big problem in Japan, too. Due to a lack of labor, the number of economic migrants called as trainees is increasing rapidly without acceptance of diversity. A spirit of harmony is a fundamental mindset, so cultural difference becomes a frequently cause troubles among citizens. The Japanese government should provide diversity education to develop society. Best regards, 5971mak Best regards, 5971mak
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