Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Our judicial system is very rigid and less flexible against transitions of our society. The court and juries always give importance to precedent judgements ahead of creating new ones which correspond to new situations and circumstances. For example, LGBT individuals are now regarded as one of the personal charecters and they are not curious anymore. Despite of the new social norm, the court still clearly rejects same-sex marriage. Dual passport is also on the same line. I suppose that such state comes from collective harmony and ignorance of news media. TV and newspaper don't report these controversial issues, resulting in the indifference of the general public unfortunately. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Supplementary essay, as you edited/writing regarding the seniority system, is concise and pursuasive flow of sentences. While the essay shows straightforward expressions, logical thinking can make the readers accept and support the thoughts. The essay is very informative for me. I appreciate your kind and gentle instruction. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I have never imagined the spending time for daily commuting such a long time like 90 minutes for one way. I am afraid that long commuting time can cause sleep deprivation because 90 minutes one way means three hours routines daily. Consequently, those who work in urban area like Tokyo can have limited hours to stay at their homes. I think people who can endure long commutes will be able to continue working in Tokyo. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you for your feedback. You shared me with a lot of new expressions!
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacheer SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you very much.
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I understand that my sentences lacks smooth flow of context. I will pay attention to the connection of my thought while focusing on the topic. Best regards, 5971mak
