Dear SaraRoseNY
Thank you for your wonderful correction again!
Writing lessons with you are really enjoyable because I feel my expression become expanded.
The "laugh" synonyms, the word "laudable", and "undergo" are new for me, and so useful!
To connect two sentences is also helpful, thank you so much.
I'll read aloud, and practice the sentences that you proofreaded.
Best regards,
Mkawa
You have corrected my writing to be excellent. I read aloud twenty times. I want to acquire this power of expression.
Thank you for your refined writing. I am reviewing while reading aloud. I will challenge various topics.
I didn't give enough consideration to the usage of pronouns. Thank you for pointing out. I will do my review.
Your expression perfectly expresses what I want to say and is a beautiful sentence. I will read aloud and review. Thank you very much.
Thank you for always giving me really good advice, I really appreciate it.
Thank you for correcting the naive style sentences.
Thank you for suggesting the sophisticated writing that I am aiming for.
Dear SaraRoseNY
Thank you for your fantastic correction! I was impressed by it. The way how to use "however" is so helpful to express my thought. I'll try to use it once in my composition from now on.
Every time, I feel you know my mind more than me. Your expression is more appropriate to my thought than mine. Thank you so much.
I'd like to submit another composition soon!
Have a great day!
Best regards,
Mkawa
Thank you for your wonderful editing. I will try my best to write articles like this.
