Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. A statistics of giving birth last year recorded the minimum number in Japan. The declining number of babies is already a serious social issue that will devastate national security in the near future. The balance between work and private life is now urgent to be improved so that more couples can start families. Flexible options regarding relocation of work should be expanded to adapt individual workers circumstances in a advancing aging society. To stop collapse of our society, companies should allow employees to choose options for their family circumstances. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Your corrections are persuasive and agreeable step by step development of contents. I review your correction to improve my skill. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Because the "Childcare Allowance for paternity leave" is paid from public employment insurance, the take-home pay is approximately 80% of the wages before the leave. Thus, if the paternity leave would be extended to three months, more young fathers could focus on looking after their babies wothout financial worries. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I review your corrections to make my writting a clearler presentation. Thank you very much. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. While talking about daily meals, my younger son frequently focus on dishes that we have never cooked. Despite of no cooking experience with unfamiliar ingredients such as crabs and deep seawater fish, he had interesting in cooking dishes with new flavors. Since he is enthusiastic about new tastes, he frequently use unique spices. As I am always follow common recipes, he has different view in cooking. Best regards, 5971mak
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Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I review your corrections to understand "Japanese translation" errors. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I reviewed the usage of replace not to make a mistake again. Thank you for kind instruction. Best Regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Absolutely, a rapid increase of the elderly is already a serious issue such as elderly people living alone. While their children live in distant urban regions for their work, many of them tend to feel isolated. Although community centers provide them with activities of hobbies and gatherings, fragile elderly residents frequently avoid participating in these activities. Since public nursing care is available, this service should cover them who always stay at home. By utilizing community centers and the care-giving services, supports and aids should be provided to help elderly citizens reduce a sense of loneliness. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Due to expansion of air travels, potency of infection among migrants grow constantly. Although pre-checking health condition before boarding is available, its latent period can bring new infection cases to distant places easily. Thorough infection control measures should be implemented upon entry into the country. Best regards, 5971mak
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for proofreading my writing. I truly enjoyed reading the revised version and your explanations. The summary terms are really helpful to write concise sentences. The "conclusion first" format is important, but I tend to forget it. I'll write another journal soon. Have a great weekend. Best regards, Mkawa
