TeacherSaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I understand that I should have mentioned the conclusion regarding the passage. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Still, although some people believe traditional gender roles, the Japanese government should notify them the danger of one breadwinner in a household. Given the importance of upcomming financial crisis in Japan, I strongly support to elevate female empowerment to create a prosperous society. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Since processes of generative AI are invisable for users, it is difficult for users to check how the AI creates documents, novel information, and new advances. Due to a lack of inspecting the processes, unexpected results may happen unintentionally. Human monitoring is indispensable to deter the dangers of generative AI. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. As online threats have become obvious more than ever, these three key measures should be encouraged by both users and governments to combat malicious activities in the internet. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. As societies has become globalized, we can have more convenient and lucrative environment than ever. However, as a result of internalization, workers are forced to compete by having more advantages and skills. Thus, schools should introduce real atmosphere of a variety of businesses to raise awareness of learners with strong motivation. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Just as with the ratings given to staff by customers, I wish companies' HR department implements the ratings given to superiors by workers. Having collabolative atmosphere would be indispensable for high-productivity. Thus, "fukihara" should be eradicated as much as possible in workplaces. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I think that lawyers who continue to provide irresponsible legal explanations should quit. Their actions only serve to complicate the resolution of a case and create further confusion. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. As increasing burdens of families' spendings become obvious, more and more families choose private funeral style where only family and relatives participate in ceremony nowadays. Due to difficulty in managing the ceremonies and burial graves, grave-closing seems to common in Japan. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. While governments encourage health promotion, healthy ingredients such as fish and soybeans have got attention to help consumers elevate good health. One of the soybean products, tofu, has become a popular product in western countries. I also prefer having tofu dishes, particularly, freeze-dried tofu called "Koya-dofu" is my favorite dish. By using freeze-drying product of tofu, the tofu product becomes a porous and spongy which can absorb a lot of wafu soup stock. It can make me enjoy the palatable soup flavor with spongy tofu. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Once robotic surgery were doubted to be safe or not, piled up remote operations seems to make the machine reliable under supervision by skilled surgeons. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Fictional novels help me understand how and why heinous crimes happen. Through reading such stories, I understand the importance of humanity which is critical to maintain a peaceful society. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Given the importance of environmental potection from global warming, governments should raise awareness of eco-friendly business activities. While developing social norms regarding our environment, governments should strengthen regulation against harmful corporation policies. Without peaceful and soothing environment, there must be a lot of struggling issues to overcome climate crisis. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. After people retire their jobs and finish raising their children, they may lose a purpose in life. Working in welfare careers can provide both wages and a sense of contribution to their societies. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Rice mold seems to be a special and unique ingredient that produces a tariety of healthy gut bacterias. Science studies evaluatd the usefulness for good health. Miso is one of the farmented products from the mold. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Making things organized is a daily routine for me. By practicing it, I can save time because tasks would be managed quickly. Best regards, 5971mak
