Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regrds, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Your logical flow is easy to understand and persuasive. I try to brush up my writting skill in English essays. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Although the price of low-cost carriers is appealing, I usually purchase discounted air-tickets of major airlines. It is hard for me to abandon the peace of mind that comes with branded airlines. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. I am concerned that the young now heavily dependent on their smartphones to exchange words with their friends. Their situations are an addiction level so that they may have difficulty handling daily things when their smartphones ran out of battery. I am afraid that they may excessively hesitate to communicating with others on face-to-face conversation. Teachers should instill them with the importance of verbal communication to build reliable relationships. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful for making a flow of coherence. I keep it in mind to write a essay with the flow of logical sentences. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I understand that I should have mentioned about long-term commitment. As for this topic, currently, the Japanese government subsidizes the "Regional Revitalization Cooperation Team project" nationwide in Japan. This project has a policy to actively welcome young people from outside the region in rural areas where depopulation and aging are progressing rapidly, to have them carry out regional cooperation activities, and to maintain and strengthen regional power while responding to the needs of urban residents who are eager to live in the region and contribute to the local community. This can be a beneficial opportunity for young people who do not have the funds to open their own store in the urban cities. The local municipalities provide their tenant spaces, accomodations, and camaraderie with local residents to the newcomers. The governments expect that some of the participants in this program may hope long-term commitment voluntarily. Depopulation in rural areas is a critical issue in Japan nowadays. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I agree with the huge demand of AI machines in agriculture and elderly care businesses. Since these industries contain a lot of strenuous manual tasks, the young don't prefer working in the fields. In particular, according to my friends who work as farmers aged 50 years old, current many farmers discourage their children to inherit their family bisiness because of low wages with long working hours. Although agricultural machines are already available, a chain of work tasks still persists stressful working situations. Even though AI machines will be available, they are powerless and useless against drastic deterioration of weather conditions like droughts and global warming. As for nursing care industry, some people claim introducing AI tools to mitigate workers physical tasks, but the effectiveness is limited due to pervasion of dementia. The disease demands care givers catching atmospheres of care service users. I don't think that AI can grasp the eerie atmosphere of the excited users come from cognitive impairment and loss of self-repression. In these two fields, especially, human labor seems to be essential for maintenounce even if AI tools and robots develop. Therefore, I believe that internationalization and diversification of Japanese society will be indispensable to sustain while accepting economic migrants as a part of communities. They should not be treated as replaceable parts for businesses. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you for the corrections. I'll try to learn how to write in casual format.
Thank you very much. I learned new phrases, such as "the other way around."
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I agree with the elevation of infectious diseases such as flu and hand, foot, and mouth disease. Since people refrained from going out during the COVID-19 pandemic, they missed opportunities of these infections and herd immunity is said to decline. Therefore, we should pay attention to the virus infections while practicing preventable behaviors in daily life. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I agree with the importance of having a passion to do. As long as ones maintain strong motivations, they can delay the onset of aging. Therefore, I believe that it is necessary for them to find worth doing. I also want to follow him to make the future better for next generation. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
