Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. In my view, the Japanese government is lazy to develop school curriculum. Japan is ranked at the 87th in EF EPI survey. (The English Proficiency Index (EF EPI) is a global ranking of English proficiency levels in countries where English is a second language, based on English proficiency surveys of adults in 113 countries and territories around the world.) Despite such terrible condition of school education in Japan, the government is hesitant to reform and update the current school crriculum. Considering the future of the young, the government should take as possible measures as they can. Authority should provide more English communication class from elementary schools with individualized classes. Local government should offer tourist volunteer activity to those students who are interested in communicating in English. At the same time, national government should hold events to select outstanding students while giving them subsidies to go abroad for study and work. Students should be informed with the importance of English proficiency to gain the advantage in the global world. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
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Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that teach me appropriate word choices. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are impressive and orderly writting. Your sentences are thought provoking and persuacive. Best Regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Having good health has now become a common interest for citizens because many of them feel anxious in their future when aging rapidly ongoing in Japan. To lengthen their wholesome health in lifetime, they intentionally pay attention to preventing lifestyle sicknesses nowadays. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. In Japan, day care centers are not only for children but also the elderly. Since public elderly care giving services have started, day care centers for fragile elderly people have been established to look after them. I should have written "day care centers for the elderly." In fact, some local authorities established such facilities beside public halls, kindergartens, shopping malls, and schools to foster chances communication and interection between the elderly and the young. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Yes, humans are weak to convenience and comfotableness, but everybody wishes their children to live in a peaceful environment. Since they are selfish for their children, as far as science discloses what can happen in the future, more people will choose conscientious options. I believe that collective goodness can transform the world to become better little by little. The important thing is that ” Even if the world were to end tomorrow, I would still plant an apple tree today" by Martin Luther. I also never give up changing our society to be better for my sons and grandsons in the aging crisis of Japanese demographc. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for correcting my writing and your comments about my sentences. I have learned so many ways to paraphrase, thanks to you! Plus, I’ve never heard “he got butterflies” before! It’s interesting expression and I like it! Thank you very much. Kind regards, wako38
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I wholly agree with your concern that smartphone can be a harmful tool for the young children. In case of Japan, smartphone companies offer kids version of the internet on the devices to exclude violence and porne which are harmful to their healthy growth. Although some say the freedom to know is important, I am in favor of such censorship to prevent children from delinquency. If parents feel to reduce pop-up ads for sweets and drinks for their children, they can set up blocking such advertisements. Furthermore, a search website " Yahoo Japan" provide a kids version search site so that they are kept away from bad websites without knowing it. Nowadays, the internet has become an essential tool for students and young adlts, so it is critical for parents to instill how to get along with the digital communication and information in their children. Segregation of them from the internet is inappropriate, rather, they should be aware of appropriate usage of the intenet and elevation of computer literacy. Best regards, 5971mak
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Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. In my guess, a social norm of collective harmony have maintained the seniority-based salary system in Japan. Due to the idea that everybody is evaluated with same salary depending on their ages, they can share a sense of fairness in the company. Although the situation might be helpful to raise a sense of strong camaradarie over factory employees who have to do same tasks in the past, current working situations have drastically changed like sales representative, hospitality jobs, and a variety of instructors. Subsequently, individuals' working skills become critical because their skills are commonly different. So individuals' effort is important and employers should prepare new salary system to reward each workers effort. As society changes, companies should be transformed to enhance and levarage every workers' talent so that they can be more productive to contribute to their companies. Best regards, 5971mak
