Thank you. I'll keep trying to correct the unnatural position of a verb.
Thank you. Your examples which show how to combine sentences are very helpful.
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you very much. I'll keep trying to understand the "top-short' English structure.
Dear Sara, Thank you for your helpful corrections and warm comments. I'll keep writing! Thanks! Best regards, Midori
Thank you for your feedback and informative view on this topic!
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you very much for correcting my sentences. I understand what a photo exercise aimed and I didn't do it. Before writing this composition, I asked IDIY office if it's OK to write what I think of the image of the photo, then they said it's OK, so I wrote what I thought of the image. However, your explanation is right. I will try to describe the image next time. Thank you very much. Best regards, atsuko5
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for your kindness and advice! Your encouragement (not only for my English writing, but also for my life story) is always empowers me. Starting with "by conducting experiments beforehand,..." was similar structure to Japanese explanation. I thought that explanation of something has to be later position in English, but you revised like that sometimes, so there are some common methods in both languages. From now on, I try to make sentences more understandable and clearer, using this method. I also learned the importance of indirect speech. In addition, more effective expressions of policy, such as "approach," "strategy," and "vision" are so helpful. I'm sorry I couldn't say thank you earlier. Have a great Sunday. Best regards, mkawa
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you very much for correcting my sentences. That was amazing this time too. I found a lot of new words, so I looked them up in the dictionary. It helps me become proficient in English. I will continue to put what I learned from you into practice. I hope you don't mind if I ask advice of you from now on. Best regards, atsuko5
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you very much. I can understand the difference between "discard" and "abandon."
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for your corrections and alternatives. I could rarely think of that kind of sentences as usual, but I will try to do it. It's very kind of you to tell me the opening hours for submission. I will submit by the time. I appreciate your warm support. I wish you the best luck. Best regards, atsuko5
Dear Sara, Thank you for your helpful advice! It 's still difficult for me to write an English essay in a natural way. I'll keep trying! Have a nice weekend! Best wishes, Midori
