Thank you for your review! It's good to know that I should use "fee for daycare" instead of "tuition fee for daycare".
Thank you!
Dear Julia Vivian, Thank you very much for your correction! Although I was not satisfied with the amount and the price (700 JPY/ 5 GBP for two people) of the meal kit, the taste was much better than mine. You can see how the company makes a daily effort from the taste. Again, I really appreciate your help as always. Best regards, Ayako Nara
Thank you for the advice. 'practice makes perfect' is a good saying. I will try my best to improve my English skills.
Thank you for your corrections. I’ll keep on trying.
Thank you for your encouraging feedback!
Hello Julia Vivian You picked my writing and corrected them very clearly. Thank you so much. Have a good one.
Dear Julia Vivian, Thank you very much for your correction! I really don't like health check because I'm super ticklish; every time I get this type of notification, I feel very blue. The stress of thinking health check would make me sick. I really appreciate your help as always. Best regards, Ayako Nara
Thanks Julia for correcting my sentence. I practice more! By the way “Ohanami” means Sakura viewing while doing picnic, it’s one of the Japanese culture. Maybe you can find about it on the net
Thank you for your support. And thank you so much for your explanation and alternative sentences, they are help me a lot. Have a wonderful day!
Thank you for quick response and your great help!
Dear Ms. Julia Vivian, Thank you so much for making a correction of my essay. As you said, the people in Okinawa had longer life expectancy than the other Japanese regions. It is said that the traditional Okinawa cuisine is good for healthy lives. However, the life expectancy of Okinawa have been sharply dropping nowadays. The reason is considered that American diet becomes more and more popular there. A lot of American army bases are located there, so Okinawa has been heavily influenced by American culture. Of course, I love American food, such as McDonald's or KFC. However I must be careful about what food I eat! Best wishes, Mitsuhiro Haga
Dear Ms. Julia Vivian Thank you so much for correcting my essays everyday. The Japanese calender is a little tricky because it has two different year-counting systems. We often confuse what year it is now. Actually, considerable money and effort have been spent on changing the name of era. However, we have a strong affection for it. I think this feeling comes from our respect for Japanese emperor. The current emperor, who is going to abdicate on 30th April, have worked so hard to encourage or console all the Japanese people. I hope you had a wonderful weekend. I am looking forward to learning from you again. Best wishes Mitsuhiro Haga
Thank you for the advice. I understood how to use "because". It was useful.
Tank you for your comment!
