Dear Ms. Julia Vivian, Thank you so much for revising my essay. The plutinum jubilee was also reported in some medias in Japan. I was so surprised that the celebration continued three days long! Although I only caught a glimse of the event, I was overwhelmed the fervor of the people gathered around the palace. I was also astonished at so many pop icons, from Elton John to Paddington Bear, taking parts in the celebration. I reminded once again how much the Queen is respected by all classes of British people. She has gone through so many difficulties both in national affairs and in family issues. Despite the hardships, she has stood still as a monarch for 70 years, which can never achieve without her incomparable devotion to the nation. We all have a concern about her health, but we do hope for her longevity and happiness. Best wishes,
Dear Julia Vivian-sensei, Thank you for correcting my text. I'm relief because I could write a quite good English somehow. I'll study English my best with your comment. Sincerely yours, Furuya
Thank you for your corrections and clear explanations.
I am grateful for your kind advice.
Hi Julia How’s your weekend? It was terrible rain today. I appreciate your corrections.
Thank you for the corrections! Your messages are always encouraging. I am looking forward to seeing you again.
Dear Julia Vivian-sensei, Thank you for correcting my text. Oh, I forgot any articles and wrote any misspelled words. Thank you for teaching me about 'awesome', too. I'll study English well with your commnet. Have a good Sunday! Sinserely yours, Furuya
Thank you for the correction. Your suggestion and message are always very helpful and encouraging. I am very satisfied that you respect my original text while correcting exactly where necessary. I am looking forward to seeing you again.
Dear Julia Vivian-sensei, Thank you for correcting my English text! I was glad because this text is a little good. I'll study English with your comment. Thank you very much! Sincerely yours, Furuya
Thank you for your feedback and comments. I try to enjoy life in London.
Dear Julia Thank you as always being so attentive to detail during my lesson!
Thank you for your corrections and kind comments, Julia Vivian.
Your comments are easy to understand and help me a lot. Thank you for your corrections.
Thank you for your corrections and kind comments!
I was able to understand the words and the circumstances of the U.K. Thank you very much for your correcting.
