Dear Teacher Julia Vivian Thank you for checking and teaching. I learned that “don’t use the same word in one sentence”. Thank you for changing my word to a lovely word. Please check my sentences again. Kind regards, Yasu
Thank you for giving me alternative words and phrases.
Dear Ms. Julia Vivian, Thank you so much for your revision and considerate words. Your words always motivate me to study English. Although my English skills have improved for this year, I feel frustrated every time I cannot express my opinions or thoughts well in English. Sometimes, I become pessimistic that I will never be able to have a good command of English... The more I study, the more I find how it is difficult to master another language. Anyway, I know the only way to improve my ability is continuous efforts. I will keep my studying from now on. It is my pleasure to be one of your student! It is so cold here in Tokyo today. Influenza has started to spread widely in Japan nowadays. I guess it's much colder in England now. Please do take care of yourself. Best wishes, Mitsuhiro Haga
Dear Ms. Julia Vivian, Thank you for your revision for my English email. It is a liitle surprise to me that the word "sophomore" is not used in the UK. The difference between the English in the UK and the English oin the US is sometimes confusing. However, it is really fun to study those differences. I hope you enjoy your weekend! Best wishes Mitsuhiro Haga
Thanks for pointing out my mistakes and your advice!
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Dear Ms JuliaVivian, Thank you for your feedback. Although my writing wasn't grammatically incorrect, suggestions about more common expressions are highly appreciated.
Thank you Julia.
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Thank you very much for correcting my English and kinds words.
Thank you for giving me alternatives. I got new expression from your comments!!
Thank you so much for useful information.
I enjoyed this topic, thank you for your clear advice!
As always, thank you for your corrections and comment. It took long time to finish up with this, but with your comment. I feel good having tried it.
Thank you very much for useful information.