
Dear JuliaVivian, Thank you very much for your kind feedback and encouragement. I truly appreciate your thoughtful corrections and alternative suggestions, which are always very helpful to me. I feel like I have written something similar before, but sometimes when taking on challenging tasks, the means and the ends can become reversed. Those who take on risky endeavors may need to be particularly mindful of that. On another note, I have been feeling a little under the weather recently due to the sharp temperature changes during this seasonal transition. I hope the weather where you are is comfortable and that you’re keeping well. Thank you again for your continued support. I look forward to working with you next time. Best regards, Transcendent

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Dear JuliaVivian, Thank you very much for your feedback and for kindly accepting my request order. I am delighted to hear that my text sounded natural, and I truly appreciate the corrections as well as the alternative words and phrases you suggested. I also value your advice regarding reading and listening. I will make an effort to incorporate more English books and articles into my routine, as well as audiobooks and shows, in order to further improve my vocabulary, rhythm, and comprehension. Thank you again for your thoughtful guidance. I look forward to continuing my learning and to sharing more of my writing with you in the near future. Best regards, Transcendent

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