
Thank you for your correction and advice!

Thank you again, Desiree. I am glad that you liked my way of description. I try to make my writing humorous because it can be more enjoyable during writing. I hope to see you next time. Have a wonderful day.

Hello, Desiree. I appreciate your corrections of my English sentences in detail. Thank you for your advice about usage "I can see" and "I see". I hope to see you next time. Have a good day!

Thank you for giving me a reply. You are a very good English teacher for me !

Thank you very much for your comment. This makes me think about using "this is because". I thoroughly understand your point with the background. Several Japanese writing books list this phrase as we should remember. So I think many Japanese people use it. Thank you very much.

I used same words in my writings repeatedly without realizing it. The message would be very helpful. Thank you a lot.

Thank you for correcting my English essay. I wonder if you have "a point day" in your country.

Thank you very much!

Thank you for your corrections and kind comments!

Thanks for correcting my essay, but I did not ubterstand the meaning of your comment : it was a little weaker than some others I have corrected.

Thank you a lot of your advice. I leant very much. Shinichi,

Thank you for your detailed comments.

Hi Desiree, Thank you for the correction and I'm happy to get a advice the teacher who came from Canada. I could learn a lot. I visited many places in Toronto. For example, CN tower, Niagara falls, ROM, Casa loma, Algonquin Park, etc. Toronto is awesome city. Thanks, Yauso

I am glad that the teacher commented on my essay.

I am happy the teacher commented on my essay.