Thank you for your correction. I'm sorry that paragraph no,3 is a little bit strange, but your sentence described very well what I want to say. I don't translate my essay from Japanese to English, but I don't have enough vocabulary and examples, so my essay looked strange. I have to read more article or sentences. Thank you again and have a good night!
Dear, Teacher Desiree. Thank you very much for your correction to my sentences and detailed explanation. As your advice, I made a duplicate mistake about "does". I'll try to reduce mistakes like this. I'm looking forward to taking your corrections again.
Thank you so much.
Thank you for your correction. Your commentaries are easy to understand and useful to me. I will keep up with studying English. Kyoko Mori
Dear, Teacher Desiree. Thank you very much for your correction to my sentences and detailed explanation. Sometimes, my teacher told me that my sentences are too long to understand. Then, I'll try to write English sentences shorter than now. I'm looking forward to taking your corrections again.
Thank you so much.
Thank you very much for your corrections!
Dear teacher Desiree, Thank you for your collections and useful advice, Desiree sensei. I will keep it in my mind! See you again soon! Yanta
Thank you very much for your corrections!
Thank you very much for your corrections!
Thanks always! The difference between "can" and "will" is sometimes very difficult for me. But your example is so helpful! I'm looking forward to working with you soon!
Thank you very much for your corrections!
Thanks for your corrections. I learned the clear difference between "can" and "could."
Dear Teacher Desiree, Thank you for proofreading my writting. That encouraged me to study English. Sincerely , Kyoko Takahashi (tahou929)
Thank you for your revision. Your version is clearer and more concise than mine, so I have a lot to learn.
