Thank you as always. Your input has been invaluable in improving my English.
Hello, Desiree, How are you? It's nice season in the year, we enjoy pleasant weather, fresh greeneries, beautiful flowers. Finally, people go outside without wearing a mask in Japan. I still prefer to wear a mask the inside of a building, in a train and stations. I think it is not for my safety but for keeping comfortableness between people. Thank you for the amendments you made on my essay. Your comments flattered me a lot, and encourage me to write the next. You gave me some good knowledges. The use of "citizen" is quite interesting. I like the phrase, "expose an ugly side". "their authority" not "their authorities", because when it means power, it's uncountable noun, which I found in dictionary. I hope to see you soon again. Bye for now. Yoko
Thank you as always!
Thank you as always!
Dear Desiree, I'm sorry to hear about your husband. I'd like to express my condolences. The story is so sweet. Thank you for sharing it with me. As always, your amendments make perfect sense to me, thank you so much. I hope to see you soon again. Bye for now Yoko
Thank you for your correction and comments.
Thank you for correcting my sentence. I could get many important points for writting sentence shorter. I thought I must have a good command of English grammer. I'm thinking I want to ask a favor of Desiree tearcher again. I'll do my best for my goals.
Hello, Desiree. How have you been? Thank you for the amendments you made on my submission. Your nice messages make me happy as well. the explanation about the first sentence is perfect! You made me understand why. thank you so much. I appreciate your kind consideration as always. Hoping to see you soon again. Bye for now. Yoko
Thank you for correcting my sentences with useful comments. It shows me how I can make my writings simpler and more natural.
Dear Desiree Thank you for your kind feedback! Have a wonderful day!!
Dear Desiree, Thank you for your useful comments. I did not know about the average number of words of English sentences as I had thought that longer sentences look smarter.
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Dear Desiree Thank you for your kind message! Have a wonderful day!!
Dear Desiree Thank you for your useful explanation! Have a wonderful day!!
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