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Dear teacher Desiree, I'm sorry that my review is late. Thank you for correcting my text again. Your correction was what I was trying to say(my second sentence). It was helpful, and I found what I could do to improve my text. Thanks a lot!

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Hi, Desiree! I'm Rina. Thank you for your kind feedback! Have a wonderful day!!

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Hello, Desiree. It's nice to hear from you again. Thank you for the corrections you made on my essay. Actually, I wished octopus didn't feel pain, but reading your comments, I feel guilty a little bit. I feel sorry for the octopus I have had. Next time when I eat octopus, I will apologize to the octopus on the plate before eating. hahaha... "the olden days"is new word for me, thank you. I hope to see you soon again. Best regard. Yoko

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Thank you for correct for me, again. It was very easy to understand. I learned a lot.

Thank you for your polite correction. I learned a lot.

Good morning, Desiree teacher. Thanks a lot. See you next time.

Thank you for correcting my text. Don't worry about being late. Your practical suggestions and corrections are helpful for me to improve my writing.

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One of the difficult things about English is tense. Thanks your advice, I learnt how I can incorporate information about time more precisely. Thank you very much.

Dear Desiree I like a nice homemade soup when it's getting cold in winter, too. Thank you for your effective feedback! Have a wonderful day!!

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