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Thank you for your correction. I have learned the use of "favorite."
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Thanks for amending my diary. I’m glad to see my fixed diary, because I found my mistakes that I couldn’t realize by myself. Thanks a lot !
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Thank you for your resourceful instruction. Especially for last sentence, I am pleased to learn how you English native speaker think in this case. Last sentence means below. If parents are using their smartphones all time, their children must not be willing to limit their smartphones. In Japan, Most adults are always using their smartphones, almost playing games, browsing SNS or shopping sites, reading comics. Under this circumstance, children must not intend to keep themselves from using their smartphones.
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Thank you very much for your feedback. I can learn a lot from your corrections. Your message encourages me to learn more English. Have a nice day!