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Hello again, Tama, Thank you for the corrections on my free composition. You also kindly wrote me the explanation, thank you. You are right. "kindness" and "duty" " obligation" don't go together. It's the coldest time in a year in Japan, and maybe, so is it in your country. I am really looking forward to having warm and beautiful spring. Take care and see you next time. Yoko

Dear Tama, Thank you for the corrections. On the first thought, I thought that 16-year-olds were too young, but giving them the voting right may raise an awareness of their own ignorance about politics. There are always those who claim it's a scheme trying to take an advantage from it, though. Take care and see you next time. Yoko

Dear Tama, I'm glad to hear from you again. Thank you for the amendments you made on my submission. I always think it's difficult to change ideas that my husband has, even though he and I are almost the same age. But, I know I need to trust young people's perspective and respect their ideas. See you next time, Yoko

Dear Tama, Thank you for editing the email. Your comment made me feel confident in writing in English. l look forward to working with you again in the future. best regards, kegocchi

Hello, Tama, thank you for the amendments you made on my submission. They aer all make sense to me. Bye for now and see you next time. Yoko

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Dear Tama, how are you? I understand why you removed the phrase 'and disclose them' reading your clear explanation, thank you. 'make light of it with people' it's a good expression that means what I meant to say. I like it! Thank you for all. Take care and see you next time. Yoko