Thank you very much. I could understand what you pointed out to me about my mistakes. I would ask you again.
Hello miss Carolyn It was so hot today in Tokyo. This campaign does not work at all up to now unfortunately. Tokyo is densely populated. People already give up and embrace terrible commuting time. Best regards, Hiroko .
Dear Carolyn I appreciate your quick response.( To tell the truth, I was surprised and very glad to find your response ) This is a very short essay, therefore it takes only several minutes to write. But it is really enjoyable time thinking about how to express my opinion in an effective way with 50 words. It is my pleasure to read your comment and check my rewritten essay. See you soon SIncerely yours, Hiroko
I really appreciate your kindly answer come. It's very useful for me. I try to use phrases which have teach me when I speak with students and staffs. Thank you very much! Kind regards, Ayukahi
Thank you for your comment. I am glad to hear that you are also mother of 2 children. When I stayed in Perth, I had hardly seen young children used a digital gadget. However here in Japan, there are a lot of young children use smartphone and portable game even though it is outside. I agree with your idea, children should go outside and play a lot with nature.
Thank you for your very clear correction.
Thank you for your polite advice. I'd like to describe hypothetical situations correctly next time. Thanks a lot!
Thank you for your comment! I understood. I will try to correct my English next time.
Hello, nice to meet you! Thank you for your advice and sorry for the late reply. Your advice is clearly, so I can understand well. I will read your advice over and over. Thanks again!
Thank you for correction. It's new to me that we have to put "a" before "radius". I will use it as a reference.
Thanks!
Thank you! I read articles that google is developing cars with auto driving systems.
Hi, Carolyn Thank you for correcting. I think Barre is effective for making nice muscle and keeping a slim body. It is so nice! Anyone can gain and build muscle if they exercise regularly. It's never too late to do so. See you soon. Yayoi
Thank you for your corrections and comments!
Thank you for giving me good suggestions and showing me crisp and natural alternatives. I'll see to it that your advice will be of great help to improve my writing skill.
