Hello Carolyn Thank you for the corrections and the nice comments you made on my essay. In the 3rd sentence, I remember I received advice that negative word, like "not" , should be placed at a beginning of sentence. In the 5th sentence, the sentence you wrote to replace mine sound good! I like it. The last sentence, I still don't understand the difference of meaning between"would" and "could" Maybe,,,, I hope I will understand someday. Hope to see you soon. Yoko
Hi Carolyn, Thanks for asking. I am pretty good. Getting a feedback from native speakers like you is really helpful to make my writings in English more natural and fluent. Thanks for your work.
Thank you for the correction. I appreciate it.
Hello Ms. Carolyn, The alternative sentences you suggested were very helpful for me. Thank you for your gracious advice!
Thank you!!
Dear Carolyn Thank you for checking my writing. I'm glad to hear you like tofu too. I also like frozen-dried tofu, which is called koya-dofu in Japanese. Have you tried it? If not, please try it. It tastes different from tofu, but it's delicious! I always look forward to your checking my writings. With kind regards, Sisi
Very helpful corrections and alternatives! I've learned a lot. Thank you :D
Thank you verymuch!
Thank you for your correcting and warm message. Your detailed explanations are very helpful. Thank you very much.
THank you for your feedback and corrections. This exercise is a realistic one, and I will use these wordings next time. Tomoo
Thanks for your correcting! I like a phrase you gave 'she is nowhere in sight' and want to use this in other exercises. I'll keep you posted. Best regards;)
Thank you for helping me with English writing. I will use the word "labour shortage" at another time. I try to improve my English writing skill.
Thank you for the corrections!
Thanks for coaching me, Yuichi
Thank you very much for correcting my English and answering my questions. I am sorry for my late thank you.