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Hello, Ms. Marsha. Thank you very much for your corrections. I'm glad to know the expression "I have always wanted to see them even if it is only once." I also learned a lot of others from your corrections. Thank you very much again, and best wishes, Isabel

Thank you so much. _φ(･_･

Thank you for your useful advice. I learned from your advice and I'll try again to write English!

Thank you for correcting me.

Thank you!

こんなにたくさん直されたのは今度が初めてでした。 51歳になってIDIYで作文を見てもらう前にほとんど全く英文を書いた記憶がありません。 そこで上手くいかないのが当たり前だと思ったら楽しくなりました。 はっきり参考になる箇所もあるのですがどうしてより良い文なのかよく分からない所がありました。 今度からケチケチしないで学べる添削を選ぼうかと思っています。

Thank you so much, I like your sentence: " using the internet to explore cyberspace, which is just like living in the real world."

Hi Marsha, Thank you for correcting this essay to be natural and suggesting the optional sentences. I'll continue to practice English writing! Many thanks, Kaori

Thanks for your correction. I wanted the teacher to explain more about your editing.

Hi Marsha Thank you for correcting my writing. As it is limitted 100 words, I tend to skip many necessary words. I try to be careful about sentences whether they have good enough strycture as gramatically and also are comprehensive .

Thank you very much for your confirmation! I'm going to work hard at studying hard in order to make my dream come true. Thank you!

Thank you.

Thank you very much.

Dear Marsha, Thank you for teaching. I learned a lot of new expressions. Please do not worry about the time you submitted this diary entry. I am just writing to improve my writing skills. There is no deadline, and I don't mind waiting at all. Oldcar

この値段でここまでやっていただけると正直驚きです。 英語らしい表現に変えていただけるのも楽しいです。 将来は留学を目指しているので、継続的にお願いします。