Thank you! :-D
Thank you for reading my short essay! I understood your feedback, but 3rd and 4th sentences refers for everyone, not only for children. This is related with final sentence. Anyway, I enjoyed this topic and your feedback is very helpful for me. I'll keep studying.
Thanks for your correction. I'll use the words, "opt for" more.
Dear Marsha Thank you for giving me a nice message and correcting my composition. That's helpful and I can learn a lot from you. I will keep studying essays . I'm looking forward to getting you to check my essays soon !
Dear teacher Marsha Thank you for correcting my composition. I thought that it was a little bit of difficult for me to explain “Otoshi” I’ll think again about it, referring the mistake you found in my sentences corrected. Thank you and kind regards, Pasery
Thank you for your correction and comments! They were really helpful to me.
Thanks for your corrections. I haven’t used the word, “navigate.” I learned how and when to use it!
Dear Teacher Marsha, Thank you always for correcting my essay. I learnt other nice ways to say the same thing, such as starting with throughout my entire life or push myself beyond my limit. Thank you very much! Best regards, Hiroko Sato
I like your corrections. You changed my English so that it can sound natural. Thank you.
I learned that the word, "disputes" was a more appropriate for my essay. Thank you.
Dear teacher Marsha Thank you so much for correcting , I found that sentences I have made became sofisticated! I’m pleased with it! I learn it and I’ll improve my ability. Thank you and kind regards, Pasery
Dear Marsha san Thank you very much for correcting my sentences! At this practice, I could learn the phrase, " be sold on the idea". Thank you! Yoko
Thanks. I'll keep trying various topics.
Thank you! Your corrections are good. Among others, I like "it's a bother".
Dear teacher Marsha Thank you for your clear teaching. I learned a lot! I thought that I often lack some words which shoul be used. Next time, I’ll do my best so that I don’t omit nessesary words. Thank you and kind regards, Pasery
