hello, Marsha. It's nice to see you here again. Thank you for the amendments you made on my essay. I'm happy to read your nice comments, thank you. The first sentence; Cataract is a common disorder among the aging population, so it's unavoidable when people get old. Reading this one that you wrote, I found that the subject of two clauses should be the same in a sentence. ( in this sentence, cataract, and it ) I hope to see you soon again. Kind regards Yoko
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! According to the 2nd sentence, I learned the expression "make a beeline for." I will use it in the next chance. Best regards.
Thank you for correcting my sentences.
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! According to the 1st sentence, I learned the word "trial" as an adjective. I will use it in the next chance. Best regards.
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! According to the 1st sentence, I learned the expression "to put someone to bed." I will use it in the next chance. According to the 3rd sentence, I learned the expression "I wonder if ..." I will use it correctly in my future diary entries. Best regards.
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! According to the 1st sentence, I learned the phrasal verb "put away." I will use it in the next chance. Best regards.
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! According to the 3rd sentence, I learned the words "figure out" and "guess." I will use them in the next chance. Best regards.
Thank you for your correction. I learn a lot.
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! According to the 2nd sentence, I learned the phrase "she is the opposite at home" after the word "because." This expression is very useful, and I will use it in the next chance. Best regards.
Thank you for correcting my writing. I could learn some natural expression you taught. I would like to try using them next time.
Thank you for your corrections and kind comments, Marcha! I’ll keep up the work! Thank you very much.
Thank you for correcting my sentences.
Thank you for correcting my sentences.
I’m grateful for your excellent suggestions and clear explanations. I’ve learned a lot! I’m looking forward to taking your lesson again.
Thank you for your corrections and kind comments. I’ll try to lose some mistakes like today! Thank you very much!
