Thank you for correcting my essay. Your explanations were easy to understand and really helpful!
Hi Geoff, Hello, thank you for your correction of my writing. This time, I am so happy you told me a lot of vocabulary which is so useful, some of which were " accompanying issue", "expose us to a risk", "hopefully". I also confirmed the structure " It is to be hoped that S+V" which people often use. So I will try to use them in near future. And also. thank you for the definition "reservations". In Japanese, we can use same words between "concern" and "reservations" .... So now it's completely clear thank to you! I envy you don't have mosquitos in UK, and I understand that's one of reasons why the gardens are so kept so beautiful anywhere else. Have a nice day! Yukiko
Hi Geoff, Thank you always for your kind explanations. You definitely understand my intended meaning and that is really eye-opening! I appreciate your feedback. Have a nice evening. Kind regards, Takeshi
Hello Geoff, Thank you so much for your helpful advice. I'll review my sentences again with your feedback. Best regards, Taka
Hi Geoff, Thank you for your kind explanation. I always learn a lot from your feedback. It means a lot to me. Have a good evening! Sincerely, Takeshi
Thank you so much!
Hi Geoff, How're you doing? This time, I'm sorry my first sentence was bad. For example, when you see landscape or cook something, there is generally no laughter. But once you communicate with somebody, there's possibility to lead to laughter. It's the privilege of only human being, and only tool to enable us to be positive.... I know it's not something to explain with just one sentence, so I think I made it complicated....sorry. By the way, today I've learned about "Conjunctive adverbs " following your sentence including the word "eventually". I understand we don't need to put a conjunction like and, so, or..., but I don't know the difference between when putting a comma and semi-colon and when not. 1) ; eventually, contributing to ( with ; ,) 2) ,eventually contributing to (only , ) I would be happy if you tell me next time. Have a nice day! Yukiko
Hi Geoff, How's going? I'm good. I've completely learned about expressions with "risk", which sound quite interesting to expand my skill. Thank so much with your several explanation. I will try to use them in IDIY with you. Together, the phrase "tax dollars" also intrigued me, because you use pounds and this word seems to come from USA (^_^). For me, just "tax" or "local tax"sounds enough, but this is also added new vocabulary for me. Another takeaways, - in ways that +(verb) ( ways-plural ) -balance one's finances ( finances- plural ) -create a virtuous cycle ( create - collocation ) -eradicate poverty ( poverty - collocation ) etc. As I took them on my note, I try to memory as many as possible. Thank you! See you later! Yukiko
Hi Geoff, Thank you for your correction! Ok, you pause in the place where you would like to put comma. Wow! I've never realized it, but I'm excited to find some examples now. Thank you. This time, I've learned; - in cases where S+V ( always plural : cases + where ) - the definition of "privacy" ( that I mistook ) etc. But still....honestly there's remaining question... The expression "In a move ( the companies said ) would help ..." I've checked there're expressions " In a move that S+V" or " In a move that + V ". Is it correct if that can be abbreviated ? Then I will understand grammatically. Next time, if you remember it, please tell me. Thank you for all your support. See you next time! Yukiko
Thanks so much! I will send you another correction request.
Hello Geoff, Thank you always for your continued support. Your feedback is always excellent and beneficial!! I understood how to use a complimentary close. Have a great day. Best wishes, Taka
Afternoon Geoff, Thank you always for your explanation. I lean a lot from your feedback. I appreciate it. Have a nice evening. Kind regards, Takeshi
I sincerely thank you for your correcting my sentences. I understood your correction and expression well, and it encourages me to study English more. Thank you!
Hi Geoff, Thank you for your kind explanation and prompt reply regarding my question. I greatly appreciate your help. Kind regards, Takeshi
Hello Geoff, Thank you always for your detailed feedback. All sentences you suggested are highly helpful to me. I look forward to being reviewed my composition again. Best wishes, Taka
