Dear Jane2, Thank you very much for your thoughtful feedback and for taking the time to read my work again. I am very happy to hear that you found the topic interesting and that the explanatory details came across well. Your corrections and suggestions are always invaluable, and I will make sure to learn from them as I continue to improve. I sincerely appreciate your kind encouragement to keep up the hard work. It motivates me to keep moving forward with my writing practice. It is wonderful to hear that spring has arrived where you are, with warmer temperatures and blue skies. Here in Japan, the season is also beginning to change, and we may soon have more comfortable days as well. I hope you can enjoy the fresh season to the fullest. Thank you again for your guidance, and I look forward to working with you again soon. Best regards, Transcendent
Dear Jane2 Thank you for correcting and advising my sentences. I will join the game with my friends in September. I hope I can enjoy the game playing like Alcaraz! Thank you for guidance in the future. Best regards.
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Dear Jane2 Thank you for correcting and advising my sentences. That fare will be more expensive than we are expected. In Japan, the temperature seems like mid summer, but I am going to play tennis with my friends on the weekend. Have a nice weekends!
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Dear Jane2, Thank you very much for your thoughtful feedback and for taking the time to read my Free Composition. I’m truly glad that my observation about the value of knowledge resonated with you—it means a lot to me to know you could relate. Regarding the phrase “hypnotize people,” I understand now that it may have been unclear or misleading. After giving it further thought and research, I feel that “indoctrinate” better conveys the meaning I intended. I will make sure to use this expression—or another clearer alternative—in my future compositions. I sincerely appreciate your guidance and encouragement, and I look forward to sharing my next piece with you. Thank you again for your continued support at IDIY. Best regards, Transcendent
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Dear Jane2 Thank you for correcting and advising my sentences. I think doing English composition will improve my English skills and expand my vocabulary. Than you for guidance in the future. Best regards.
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Thank you for your feedback! I keep studing harder.
Dear Jane2 Thank you for correcting and advising my sentences. Home appliances are essential to our lives. The evolution of home appliances is dizzying. Thank you for guidance in the future. Best regards.
