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Hi Jane2! Thank you for your corrections, your useful alternatives, and your kind comments! I have learned a lot. Likewise, have a lovely weekend! bluemountain
Thank you for your corrections and comments! I am sorry for my delayed reply. I had no time for learning due to a business trip. Regards,
Dear Jane2, Thank you for your warm and encouraging feedback! I’m so happy to hear that my efforts in the Free Composition exercise paid off. I actually have some wonderful news—I passed my exam! I was able to write the English essay with confidence thanks to your support. My relatives and my mother’s friends are also very excited for me. I’ll be moving to an apartment soon to start my new life this April. There’s a beautiful row of cherry trees along a nearby river. Since I’ll finally be of legal drinking age this April, I’m looking forward to enjoying my first "hanami" with a drink there. Actually, I just realized that the cherry blossoms are blooming earlier than usual this year. It looks like they’ll be gone before I officially reach the legal drinking age in April! It’s a bit of a shame, but I think I’ll just have to enjoy the view of the blossoms this time without the drinks. Regarding my hay fever, it’s a bit tough right now, but I’ve still managed to enjoy some tennis recently. Thank you again for everything, and I look forward to our next lesson! Best regards, Transcendent
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Dear Jane2, Thank you so much for your encouraging message! I’m really happy to hear that you feel I’m getting back on track. It means a lot to me. As for my goals for 2026, I’ve always tried to use richer, more natural expressions, but I often found myself stuck in a few formulaic patterns because I was so focused on exams. I want to go beyond just writing "error-free" sentences for exams. I hope to develop my own voice and express my thoughts and feelings more naturally and effectively. I wanted to play some tennis to stay active and lose a bit of weight, but as you mentioned, my hay fever is making it quite difficult to stay outside! It’s such a beautiful season with the spring weather, so I’m trying to find ways to enjoy it while staying comfortable. Thank you again for your thoughtful feedback. I’ll be sure to let you know my exam results once I get them! Best regards, Transcendent
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Dear Jane2, thank you so much for your kind words and encouragement. I’m sorry for the late response; my hay fever has been so severe lately that I had to take a short break to rest. Regarding the exam, thanks to your support, I feel like it went very well! I’m still waiting for the official results, but I have a good feeling about it. I’ll share more about my other goals for 2026 with you soon. I’m looking forward to working with you again! Best regards, Transcendent
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Dear Jane2, Thank you very much for your encouraging feedback. I am pleased to hear your comments regarding the vocabulary and explanatory details in my latest Free Composition. I will continue working to refine my writing and further expand my range of expression. Thank you again for your continued support. I look forward to working with you again soon. Best regards, Transcendent
Dear Jane2, Regarding the wealth gap, I feel there’s a major dilemma: redistribution requires a fluid social structure, but the power to change things lies with the wealthy, who view such reforms as high-risk and low-reward. This leads to a rigid society where the gap only widens. Thank you very much for your thoughtful and encouraging feedback. I appreciate your comments regarding the details included in my Free Composition and the formation of my sentences. I will continue working to develop my writing further and to refine my use of vocabulary and structure. Thank you again for your constructive guidance. I look forward to working with you again very soon. Best regards, Transcendent
Dear Jane2, Thank you very much for your encouraging feedback. I am pleased to hear your comments regarding the formation of my sentences in this exercise. As always, I value your constructive feedback and will continue working to improve my writing further. Thank you again for your continued support. I look forward to working with you again soon. Best regards, Transcendent
Dear Jane2, Thank you very much for your encouraging feedback. I am pleased to hear your comments regarding the phrases and expressions used in my latest Free Composition. I truly appreciate your guidance and suggestions, and I will continue working to refine my writing further. Thank you again for your continued support. I look forward to working with you again very soon. Best regards, Transcendent
