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Dear Jane2 Thank you so much for your kind words and the detailed feedback on my composition. I’m thrilled to hear that my hard work is paying off! I really appreciate the constructive criticism you provided; it is exactly what I need to improve my writing. Also, thank you for your concern regarding my hay fever—it has been much more manageable lately. I always enjoy our sessions and look forward to working with you again soon. Best regards, Transcendent
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Dear Jane2, Thank you so much for your warm message and the congratulations! I'm touched that you remembered my birthday and the move as well. Regarding my hay fever, it has gotten much better now that the cedar pollen season is coming to an end. I think I'll be able to enjoy tennis next week! Thank you for your helpful feedback as always. I look forward to working with you on my next composition. Best regards, Transcendent
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Hi Jane2! Thank you for your corrections, your useful alternatives, and your kind comments! I have learned a lot. Likewise, have a lovely weekend! bluemountain
Thank you for your corrections and comments! I am sorry for my delayed reply. I had no time for learning due to a business trip. Regards,
Dear Jane2, Thank you for your warm and encouraging feedback! I’m so happy to hear that my efforts in the Free Composition exercise paid off. I actually have some wonderful news—I passed my exam! I was able to write the English essay with confidence thanks to your support. My relatives and my mother’s friends are also very excited for me. I’ll be moving to an apartment soon to start my new life this April. There’s a beautiful row of cherry trees along a nearby river. Since I’ll finally be of legal drinking age this April, I’m looking forward to enjoying my first "hanami" with a drink there. Actually, I just realized that the cherry blossoms are blooming earlier than usual this year. It looks like they’ll be gone before I officially reach the legal drinking age in April! It’s a bit of a shame, but I think I’ll just have to enjoy the view of the blossoms this time without the drinks. Regarding my hay fever, it’s a bit tough right now, but I’ve still managed to enjoy some tennis recently. Thank you again for everything, and I look forward to our next lesson! Best regards, Transcendent
