Thank you for your advice. It helped me to correct a mistake that I hadn't noticed myself.
Thank you Jane2, as always your correction aids in improving my English writing.
Thank you, Jane2. I will try to avoid using short sentences.
Dear Jane2, I am grateful for your advice. Have a nice day. Best regards, Mashroom
Thank you very much for your sound advice! Your detailed explanation is helpful.
Thank you for your advice, Jane2. I will keep practicing writing skills. I look forward to your guidance next time.
Thank you very much for your help!
Dear Jane2, Thank you very much for your adjustments and suggestions. My sentences improved remarkably thanks to your corrections. I think it will take me a long time to raise the standard of my English writing, but I believe practice makes perfect, so I will continue trying. By the way, I enjoyed my traditional grilled eel dinner last night and gained weight as I had supposed to. However, I cheered up myself, and went on the low-carbohydrate diet. I wish you the best of luck. Best regards, atsuko5
Thank you for your feedback. It was easy to follow and very helpful!
Dear Jane2, Thank you very much for your correction and suggestions. They are really helpful for me. I am lacking in English vocabulary and that is my problem. However, I will keep on trying to be able to express my thoughts more naturally. I wish you all the best of luck. Best regards, atsuko5
Thank you very much for your help!
Thank you for Corrections. i don,t have skills yet but i am trying to do my best. thank you very much!
Thank you so much Jane2! Your adjustments and additions have definitely helped me a lot!
Thank you for your warm message and clear explanation.
Dear Jane2, Thank you for your work on my writing today. I appreciate your detailed explanation with each correction, it is informative. you are also right on the spot with the sentence, "its maybe because of..." which, I wasn't sure of. Thank you for that as well.
