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Dear Jane2, Thank you very much for your thoughtful feedback and for taking the time to review my composition again. I am very glad to know that you agree about the importance of making the most of the advantages of new technologies while also learning how to live well with them. I truly appreciate your encouraging words about my vocabulary and hard work. Your revisions and suggestions are always very valuable to me, and I will continue to learn from them as I refine my writing. Thank you again for your support. I look forward to working with you on my next piece. I hope you are also enjoying your weekend and that you have a pleasant week ahead. Best regards, Transcendent
Dear Jane2 Thank you for correcting and advising my sentences. My TOEIC score doesn’t go up easily, but I decide to give up studying English. Thank you for guidance in the futute. Best regards.
Dear Jane2, Thank you very much for your thoughtful feedback and for taking the time to review my Free Composition once again. I am truly encouraged to hear that you found my vocabulary use particularly good, and it motivates me to keep working hard to broaden it even further. I also sincerely appreciate the corrections, additions, and suggestions you provided. They are always very helpful in refining my writing, and I will make sure to apply them in future exercises. Thank you as always for your kind guidance and support. I look forward to sharing my next piece with you soon. Best regards, Transcendent
Dear June2 Thank you for correcting and advising my sentences. I will manage to find the time reading books. Thank you for guidance in the future. Best regards.
Dear Jane2, Thank you very much for your thoughtful feedback and for taking the time to read my work again. I am very happy to hear that you found the topic interesting and that the explanatory details came across well. Your corrections and suggestions are always invaluable, and I will make sure to learn from them as I continue to improve. I sincerely appreciate your kind encouragement to keep up the hard work. It motivates me to keep moving forward with my writing practice. It is wonderful to hear that spring has arrived where you are, with warmer temperatures and blue skies. Here in Japan, the season is also beginning to change, and we may soon have more comfortable days as well. I hope you can enjoy the fresh season to the fullest. Thank you again for your guidance, and I look forward to working with you again soon. Best regards, Transcendent
Dear Jane2 Thank you for correcting and advising my sentences. I will join the game with my friends in September. I hope I can enjoy the game playing like Alcaraz! Thank you for guidance in the future. Best regards.
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Thank you for correcting my sentences and suggesting alternative words. They really helps.
Dear Jane2 Thank you for correcting and advising my sentences. That fare will be more expensive than we are expected. In Japan, the temperature seems like mid summer, but I am going to play tennis with my friends on the weekend. Have a nice weekends!
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Dear Jane2, Thank you very much for your thoughtful feedback and for taking the time to read my Free Composition. I’m truly glad that my observation about the value of knowledge resonated with you—it means a lot to me to know you could relate. Regarding the phrase “hypnotize people,” I understand now that it may have been unclear or misleading. After giving it further thought and research, I feel that “indoctrinate” better conveys the meaning I intended. I will make sure to use this expression—or another clearer alternative—in my future compositions. I sincerely appreciate your guidance and encouragement, and I look forward to sharing my next piece with you. Thank you again for your continued support at IDIY. Best regards, Transcendent
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