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Eden S

Eden S

Native language:
English
Total orders:
4406
Nationality:
New Zealand
Residence:
New Zealand
Skills
  • Exam Preparation
  • Business English
  • Teaching License
  • American English
  • Beginner
  • Kids
  • Advanced
  • EIKEN
  • TOEIC
  • TOEFL
  • IELTS
Certifications
- Bachelor's degree from Brigham Young University - Idaho. - Major in Liberal Arts Studies - Minor in English (with a concentration in Creative Writing) - Minor in Business Administration - Certificates in Early Childhood Education
Announcements
Hi! My specialty is providing you with the most common, natural way to express your thoughts in English. I'm not the type to simply correct your grammar. I will suggest alternative sentences that make your essay sound as if it were written by a native, English speaker. I also get all orders back to my clients within 24 hours. I look forward to working with you to develop your English skills! :)
Hobbies/Travel
I enjoy traveling! I have visited fifty-four countries in my lifetime. In Japan, I have been to Toyko, Osaka and Kyoto. I hope to return one day and climb Mt. Fuji! My other hobbies are camping, hiking and mountain climbing. I am originally from the United States, but currently live in New Zealand. It is one of the most beautiful countries in the world for people who love the outdoors.
Message from the instructor
As my new client, you should know that I will always: 1) Correct any grammar mistakes in your original sentence. 2) Teach you how to speak like a native. 3) Teach you advanced English writing and communication skills. Often, that will require me to suggest alternative sentences that are quite different from your original, but I am happy to take the time to do so because it's the quickest and most efficient way for you to learn English. :) I also like to become friends/"pen-pals" with all my clients by sharing more personal aspects of my life in the comment section at the end of each order.
  • thistle38038

    thistle38038

    Thank you for your quick response. I’ll read it cautiously.

    ★★★★
  • Hikaru123

    Hikaru123

    Thank you for your explanations and suggestions. I learned a lot of new things from your advanced expressions. I look forward to taking your lesson again.

    ★★★★★
  • Yuichi1124

    Yuichi1124

    Thank you for teaching, Eden! As you say, politeness is a good aspect of Japanese people. Holding back opinions is a good thing in some situations, but it's not always a good thing. This is a little complicated problem,,, See you next time!

    ★★★★★
  • Yuichi1124

    Yuichi1124

    Thank you for teaching, Eden! I'm good. How about you? Really? I wasn't aware Ukrainian people have been doing such a thing! It's absolutely terrifying! I wonder when this war is going to end. I came to think Putin as if Hitler or Stalin! I'll write this subject one of these days! See you next time! Yuichi

    ★★★★★
  • Yuichi1124

    Yuichi1124

    Eden I want to mention about my writing. (No.748277) I wrote, "In the middle of all this, there was a great person who deserved respect." What I wanted to say in this sentence was, "In such a challenging situation, I found a gracious person (to whom I want to show my respect)" Does this sentence make sense? Anyway, I apologize my writing was unclear. (I use an English dictionary made by Japanese people, so there are sometimes strange expressions!) Yuichi

    ★★★★★
  • Yuichi1124

    Yuichi1124

    Thank you for teaching, Eden! I think industrialization affects even human minds. Perhaps people in Pakistan haven't been polluted yet. That's why they are so kind! I wish I could live surrounded by such people! See you next time!

    ★★★★★
  • Yuichi1124

    Yuichi1124

    Thank you for teaching and sharing your new plans, Eden! First, I'm surprised to hear that you will stay Christchurch, because that's exactly where I secretly dream to visit some day! I don't trust newspaper and TV news, either. But still it's surprising that they were lying about Pakistan and Osama bin Ladin. I distinctly remember that President Obama triumphantly announced, "We killed Osama bin Ladin. Justice has been done." More than ten years have passed since then, but it appears that a lot of things are concealed behind our back! See you next time! Yuichi

    ★★★★★
  • Yuichi1124

    Yuichi1124

    Thank you for teaching, Eden! Oh, I heard it for the first time but that title sounds interesting. It seems to be a book which put together "winnie-the-pooh" and Taoism, right? I've read Lao-tze in ancient Chinese before (it was quite difficult,,,) "The Tao of Pooh?" probably explains Taoism clearly and simply. If so, I want to try it. By the way, the core of Taoism is exactly "Everything is as it is". I've always been curious that Buddhism and Taoism came to a similar (or perhaps the same) conclusion! See you next time! Yuichi

    ★★★★★
  • Kiina

    Kiina

    Thank you very much for your suggestions. I enjoy your trip blog :)

    ★★★★★
  • purple30412

    purple30412

    Dear Mr.Eden Nice to meet you. My name is Purple. Thank you so much for correcting my essay! First of all, it was my first time using this service, so I forgot to send you a message with the manuscript. I’m sorry if I’m rude. I want to write essays like native-speakers do and I want to have command to express myself fluently in English, so I’m happy with your editing style and I'm so grateful for your helpful edition! I’m going to continue to use this service and strive to reach my goal! Have a nice day! Sincely, Purple.

    ★★★★★
  • mashroom

    mashroom

    Dear Eden, I apologize for my late response. As always, the sentences you suggested are very helpful for me! Also, your story of trip is very interested and having a fun to hear. Now, are you staying in Hamza Valley? Have a wonderful trip! Mashroom

    ★★★★★
  • Yuichi1124

    Yuichi1124

    Thank you for teaching, Eden! I read a book written by a Japanese author at first. I learned that it's the essence of Vippasana to quietly ignore our feelings that arises one after another. Next, I will try a book you recommended a while ago, but as you said, it's difficult to practice Vippasana perfectly just having known a theory. After all, I need to go to a course. I'm off today and tomorrow, so I'll manage to try Vippasana Meditation by myself. See you next time!

    ★★★★★
  • Yuichi1124

    Yuichi1124

    Thank you for teaching, Eden! Oh No... It's too bad I can't hand in my writing to you during that time. There are a lot of IDIY teachers indeed, but perhaps I won't be able to find a teacher who are interested in such fascinating and profound subjects we've been talking about. (Plus, I will have a trouble finding one who edits my writing so drastically.) But still, I'm looking forward to hearing your stories that you will experience for 10 days. (I've already finished reading an elementally book about Vipassana. I want to go to a course right away...) Good night! Yuichi

    ★★★★★
  • Yuichi1124

    Yuichi1124

    Thank you for teaching Eden! I think of reincarnation in this way; Now I'm a Japanese man, but I might have been a poor African peasant 1000 years ago. I might have been a Saudi Arabian prince 700 years ago, and a Japanese woman 500 years ago. Regardless of gender or background, all of them are "I". They seem different superficially but share "the same soul". Otherwise, we can't call it "re"incarnation! Imagine One staff wear a lot of different mascot costumes in Disneyland. He might be Mickey Mouse, Minnie Mouse, Goofy or Donald Duck but all of them are "He". As for Abraham, I'm not quite sure, but an interesting event was recorded in the Gospel according to Mathew 16-16. At the top of the mountain, Jesus was talking with Moses and Elijah! By any chance, can saints be alive for thousands of years in a different dimension? Is Abraham one of them? This is a profound and complicated problem. Any way, the world God created is so mysterious... See you next time! Yuichi

    ★★★★★
  • Natsumi_oikw

    Natsumi_oikw

    I sincerely appreciate your assistance!

    ★★★★★

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