Hi Eden-san, Thank you very much for your message. I hope you are doing fine. I appreciate your response to this matter. The alternative sentences with expressions you have offered are very useful for me. I hear Western Kenya is a wonderful place. Have a great time with your family. Best regards, Ikufumi Moriya
Mr. Eden Hello! How are you! It's been a long time since I sent my essay to you, I appreciate your support. 100% Thanks to you! I passed the Eiken prel 1 exam! Writing score is quite high! I used phrases that you taught me. I memorized a lot of your phrases that had led me to be successful. I think your vocublary is super high level. You are so intelligent. That is why I am back. Now, I will try to write my daily life. I was wondering if I could have your input, again. I am so excited.
I appreciate your wonderful teaching. Your corrections gives me lots of native English every time, and you teach me not only grammatical ones but also how to express more like a native speaker. Your my best teacher.
Mr. Eden S, I really appreciate your polite feedback gratefully . I was able to understand How to use words and grammers easily. Sinserely, Cajaroa
Thank you so much for your correction. There were lots of useful information in your advices. I want to learn Native English more, so I’m going to keep studying.
Thank you!! Your message was very kind:)
I greatly appreciate you have corrected and adviced politely!
Hi Eden, Thank you for your review. Your explanations are precise and easy to understand for me. In the next time, I will take care of whether the situation in the sentence is hypothetical or not. I look forward to seeing you again. Best regards, Tucker
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! In this entry, I learned the natural word order. My family and I are fine! Best regards.
Hello, thank you for your advice. Your advice is very helpful. Next time, it would be appreciated more if you advised me why the grammatical correction is needed. For instance, why the change from "will" to "WOULD" is necessary in the sentence below. "First, our housing cost would double because our children WOULD still have to live in the current house and go to their school for several years."
Thank you for correcting! Unlike diary, it is very difficult to describe to person.
Dear Eden, Thank you for your great, helpful correction! The sentences you have suggested are so simple and direct that you can describe the sentences I had written with much less words/sentences. I think it is important to describe my thoughts with not difficult, complicated, long words but plain, short words. Therefore, your advice is very helpful and made me a great impression. I will looking forward to your teaching again soon!
Hello Mr. Eden, Thank you for your explanation!
Hi Eden-san, Thank you very much for your message. I hope you are doing fine. I appreciate your response to this matter. The alternative sentences with expressions you have offered are very useful for me. Best regards, Ikufumi Moriya
Mr. Eden Thank you for you correcting! Your simple English is to learn more for me.
