Dear Eden, Thank you very much for your feedback. Your suggestions were very helpful for me. Best regards, Orange0103
Thank you for the correction. I was so thrilled that I learned many things from it. But honestly as the same time, I lost my confidence completely. I should have started to study like this earlier. I like your teaching style. I believe you could lead me to my goal.
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! According to the 1st sentence, I learned how to use parentheses. I will use them in the next chance. > I hope you are going to get a pay raise along with that transfer! I really hope so! :) Best regards.
Dear Eden-san, Thank you very much for your message. How have you been doing? I appreciate your prompt response to this matter. The alternative sentences with expressions you have offered are very useful for me. From Christmas to New Year's, I am planning to go back to my hometown from the Tokyo metropolitan area to spend time with my parents and siblings. >PS: For more information on this topic, Google the article "Inside America's Secretive Biolabs." Thank you for the additional information. No matter how carefully we manage our samples, the challenge is how to cut human error. I am glad you are my tutor. I look forward to working with you. Best regards, Ikufumi Moriya
Dear Eden-san, Thank you very much for your message. How have you been doing? I appreciate your prompt response to this matter. The alternative sentences with expressions you have offered are very useful for me. A fire broke out in a building in downtown Osaka. It seems that the fire spread so quickly that it was difficult to evacuate. Osaka is one of the largest cities in Japan, and I feel that people in Osaka are more open and friendly than in Tokyo. For people who come to Japan for sightseeing, Osaka might be one of the friendliest cities. Have you ever tried okonomiyaki or takoyaki in Osaka? I hope this pandemic will settle down and we can travel easily soon. I am glad you are my tutor. I look forward to working with you. Best regards, Ikufumi Moriya
Hi Eden, Many thanks for your great feedback to my essays. I always enjoyed your corrections and comments, which I cannot come up with by myself as an English learner.
Thank you for detailed comments as always. I should have the original questions more carefully. Regards, YH
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! According to the 1st sentence, I learned that the word "pupil" is rarely used by native speakers. I will use the word "student" instead. Thank you for your congratulations to my daughter! We will hold her second birthday party at home tomorrow :) Best regards.
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! Yes, I also believe that she will stop sucking her thumb in a few years. The reason I want her to stop it is that she has rough skin on her thumbs, which turn red, due to the habit. It's a pity she may feel pain on her thumbs :( Best regards.
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! According to the 1st sentence, I learned the phrase "down for a nap." I will use it in the next chance. > Did your wife get jealous because your daughter responded better to you than she did to her? Yes, she got jealous and mad! Best regards.
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! According to the 1st sentence, I learned the word "voracious." I will use it in the next chance. I also learned how to use exclamation marks. Yes, she is my first and only one child at the moment. Best regards.
Thank you for your feedback with advanced expressions. I like your style and believe it works well for me to polish my writing.
Thank you very much for your quick returning. Your advice is always helpful. I practice reading the corrected writings aloud.
Thank you for very quickly and careful correction. I could learn many more natural sentences. I'd like to brush up my English more.
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! According to the 2nd sentence, I learned the phrase "the party is scheduled." I will use it in the next chance. Best regards.
