Hello, HelpfulBrit. It's nice to see you here again. Thank you for the amendments you made on my essay. Your nice messages make me so happy, thank you. It's wonderful, you added some words to the sentences so as to change them to make perfect sense. Especially, "used for ill", "some of the greatest inventions", "have an evil side to their nature", "abused by those with evil intentions", "with this in mind", I think with these phrases the sentences sound logical and easy for readers to understand. I hope to see you soon again. Kind regards. Yoko
Dear HelpfulBrit, Hi. I also appreciate to give me feedback. I'm glad to read your message and get your amendments. I hope to have the opportunity to get your feedback next time. Thank you again. Regards, m-yoshiro
I apologize for the late reply. I’m grateful for your excellent suggestions and detailed explanations. I’ve learned a lot this time too! I’m looking forward to taking your lesson again.
Thank you for correcting my sentences.
Thank you for your checking, and I was glad to know that you evaluated my English essay as almost natural. I'm looking forward to next time.
I learned the appropriate way of writing from my mistake by your correction! Great advice! Thank you!
Thanks for reviewing my writing again! I practice English more and more. See you someday.
Dear Mx. HelpfulBrit, I appreciate your advice! I wish you have a wonderful weekend!
Dear HelpfulBrit, Hi. Thank you for your feedback. I'm happy to read your suggestions. I would like to have the opportunity see you again. Thank you very much. Regards, m-yoshiro
Thank you for your checking
Thank you for correcting my sentences.
Hello, I appreciate your great advice!
Dear HelpfulBrit Hi. I’m grad to receive your feedback and to get your compliments. I learned a lot your amendments. I’m looking forward to get your review next time. Regards, m-yoshiro
Thanks for reviewing my writing! Your kind message encourages me. See you someday!
Thank you for giving me suggestions. It's hard for me to think of that way to say.
