Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! The alternative sentences you showed are very useful for me. I learned many expressions such as "compelled to." I have some menthol which can relieve itchy bite, but they are for adults and may be too strong for my daughter's skin. This is why I used ice cube. Best regards.
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! I also like Japanese big robots' cartoons, and I used to watch them when I was a child. Maybe my daughter is much more interested in "Studio Ghibli" movies than robot ones. She is just two years old, so she can't understand the stories. Best regards.
Hello Mx. TheDreamWarri, This exercise is very constructive, and your advice is very fruitful for me. I am grateful for your advice!
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! According to the 2nd sentence, I learned the phrase "to dedicate something to someone." I also had my hair cut in traditional and boring salons when I was a child. Current children including my daughter are so lucky! Your submission was not late, and I never mind it. I always appreciate your review! Best regards.
Thank you!
Thank you so much! Your correction was clear and easy to understand. Also was so meticulous. I’m going to read the modification over and over to actually pick everything you provided! Thank you.
Hello Mx. TheDreamWarri, I am grateful for your advice!
Dear TheDreamWarri, Hi. Hello again too. Thank you for giving me your feedback! As you said, I'm not good at using the determiner word and so on. So I will keep practicing to improve how to use them! I look forward to working with you again, and have a good rest of the weekend! Regards, M-yoshiro
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! It was difficult for me to write the 3rd sentence correctly, so your comments are very useful for me! Best regards.
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! I learned run-on sentences, causative sentence, etc. I will use them properly. Best regards.
Dear TheDreamWarri, Hi, I'm so good! Thank you for giving me your feedback and I enjoyed reading your explanations. I will keep practicing English from now on. I hope to work with you soon. Best regards, M-yoshiro
Thank you for correcting my essay. I love cats, but to be honest, this cat is not mine; I got the picture on the Internet..
Thank you so much for your explanations! I'm glad to have written faultless sentences. I have one Dachshund, and she's very cute! I like Dachshund too :) Best regards.
Dear TheDreamWarri, Thank you for reading my short paragraph and giving me your kind feedback. I was pleased to read your explanation about your suggestions. I want to try to correct them in the next paragraph. I look forward to working with you soon! Many thanks, M-yoshiro
Thank you for providing excellent suggestions. They are all helpful, and I will apply what I learned to my future work. I am looking forward to having your lesson again.