Hello! Thank you very much for your correction. Also, many thanks for adding the alternative sentences, which are really useful. In addition, I deeply appreciate your kind words. I will keep making efforts to improve my compositional writing skills. Kind regards, bluemountain
Hello, TheDreamWarri, How have you been? I'm fine and happy to hear from you again. Thank you for the corrections you made on my submission. Your comments are nice and encourage me to learn more. Recently, I feel like I'm not young any more and have been getting fragile. So, I'm afraid a drastic change of weather, I know I can avoid the heat by staying inside, though. I will have a break after this submission and come back a while later. I'm looking forward to having you, then. Bye for now Yoko
Thank you, I was not aware that I chose "corretion without comments". I think it was by accident. At any rate, I would like to thank you for your correctiom.
Thank you for correcting my essay. Have a nice weekend!
Thank you very much for your useful comment. I will work on your correction to further improve my writing.
Dear TheDreamWarri, Thank you for reading my diary. Your advises are helpful for me. Best regards, Nao
Hi TheDreamWarri, Your alternative sentences are very helpful! I will take a reference to this.
Dear TheDreamWarri, Thank you for checking my essay and pointing out my mistakes. Also, your words always encourage me to keep learning English harder. I'm looking forward to working with you next time. Best,
Excellent corrections! Thank you very much.
Dear TheDreamWarri, I appreciate your advice. Have a nice weekend! Best regards Mashroom
Thankyou so much. I could understand difference “which “ and “that “. It was so difficult. And I’m grateful for your alternative saying, especially about for my hometown . I want to learn it by my heart and use it when I will introduce myself next time. It was so nice!
Dear TheDreamWarri, Thank you so much for checking my sentence. You gave me confidence and motivated me to move forward. I’m looking forward to getting my English checked again soon.
Thank you for your correction. I am glad that you remember to have worked with my writing. Your alternative sentences are beneficial to me. I keep writing from now on. I hope we work together again. Have a good day!
Thank you so much, The Dream Warri I’m very happy to read your message. Now I found out that writing sentence is more difficult than reading it, although what I entry diary is helpful to improve my English skill. Thanlyou always. Have a great weekend.
Really appreciate providing an another version of essay as far as the intention and meaning of essay are same as mine. I can learn more vocabularies from your writing, thanks!