Thank you very much for your helpful comments. Also, thank you for teaching me various paraphrase expressions. I learned a lot. I am looking forward to taking your lesson again.
Thanks for your precise corrections. I also appreciate your comments. Especially I found two quotes very interesting, "Giving up smoking is the easiest thing in the world. I know because I've done it thousands of times." and "To refuse awards is another way of accepting them with more noise than is normal."
Ms.Emendatio, Thank you so much very informative messages every time! I will use participles more carefully from now. I think I need to write more and more. I am looking forward to next time! Best regards, Yoshimi
Thank you for very detailed explanation. I learn a lot. Hope having you reviewing my edits shortly.
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! According to the 3rd sentence, I learned the phrase "to put it back on." The alternative sentences you provided are very useful for me! Best regards.
hello, Emendatio. How are you? Thank you for the quick response and corrections. Your literary quotes lead me to think a lot and deep. Thank you. "reduce the amount of organ trafficking." You change "number" into "amount", that's interesting. I skipped "a " in the 3rd sentence. I'm always confusing which to choose "a" or "the". Your explanation about "a" is also helpful to understand "the." I'm always glad having you as my English teacher. Hoping to see you soon again. Yoko
Thank you for your corrections and kind comments!
Thanks!
Thank you for your corrections and kind comments. Also I’m going to use the sentence like“It comes out on video” next time. Thank you very much!
Thank you so much for the advice you gave me!
Thank you for your informative comments. I look forward to having your advise next time.
Thank you for correcting my sentences.
Thank you for checking my work.
Hello, Emendatio. It's nice to see you here again. Thank you for the corrections you made on my essay, and your nice comments make me so happy. You introduced me a way of formal writing. That's interesting, thank you. in the last sentence, you changed "wasting" into "waste" which is a basic form. When I wrote it, I thought it has to be " wasting" or " to waste" , but..... I know yours must be right and sounds right to native English speakers. Language has a lot of mystery, that's why I love to learn. Have a wonderful winter holiday and prosperous new year. Hoping to see you soon again. Yoko
Thank you for your so kind message! I sometimes confuse which pronouns are needed. Your advice helps me understand how to use them. Many thanks!
