

Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! According to the 1st sentence, I learned the difference between "fall over" and "fall down." I will use each of them properly in my future diary entries. Also I learned that it is better to split one sentence into two if it contains two different thought. Best regards.

Thank you for the corrections. It is very interesting to learn new vocabulary!

Thank you for the corrections with lots of examples!

Thank you very much, Marielle sensei, for the detailed feedback and answering the follow up questions. Your rewrite is concise and powerful. This is such a productive learning opportunity. Again, thank you so much! Hikaru

Thank you for your feedback with clear explanations!

Thank you for the corrections with some useful phrases!

Thank you for the corrections and your feedback!