

Thank you for your feedback and comments! Through this session, I found that I have a lot of things which need to be fixed in my writing, including things that I have already learnt in my previous writings but I couldn’t be able to (or forget to) implement them in Today’s writing. I totally agree with your idea about the economic inequality. In regards to the phrase ” I propose that” , I try to use them in my future writing I f I have a chance! Thank you!

Thank you for your feedback! I wrote my comment in the wrong place. Please ignore it!

Thank you for the corrections with some useful alternative sentences! I didn’t know how to use the countable version of the word”food” so it’s very helpful!

Thank you for the corrections! with “chose”to “choose”, I could have avoided this mistake…. With “ source” and”alternative” I was thinking about those but picked the wiring one. Hope I don’t make the same mistake again!

Thank you for your useful comments. I was deeply impressed. How wonderful it would be if I had started earlier IDIY and seen you. At any cost, I am determined to continue IDIY.

Thank you for your feedback! The variety of the alternative sentences helps me to expand my poor vocabulary!

Thank you for your feedback! I tend to forget to include the object of the sentence. I will be careful next time!

Thank you for the corrections! “ substantially raise”, “offset the cost” and “I propose…” are very useful expressions!

Thank you for the corrections and alternative sentences! It is good to know “food” can be a countable noun when we talk about varieties!

Thank you for the corrections! It is good to know the difference between “exclude” and “not include” !

Thank you for the correction! I am actually happy with learning British/Aussie English spelling :)

Thank you for the correction! I will be careful with the pronoun usage. I tend to make this mistake over and over again...

Thank you for reviewing and correcting my writing and detailed explanations. It is very helpful for me to learn further. I am looking forward to getting your support again in the near future.

Thank you for your comments and feedback to my question! I didn’t realize that I skipped the question “Have I ever...” part. I think I can answer this type of question with a bit of confidence next time!

Dear Marielle, Thank you for review my English sentences. I could learn a lot of things regarding how to use natural phrases and an appropriate position of an adverb. Best regards,