Hello, Your explanation was really precise and having a point, so it was very easy to understand. I appreciate your great advice! Have a nice day!
Dear Ashley, thank you very much for the feedback. All of them were very helpful. In particular, it was interesting to know that you can say ''J&J has a tough road ahead'' but you should remove the indefinite article ''a'' if you are going to say ''J&J has tough work ahead''. These subtle differences can only be learned from a native English speaker, and I am glad IDIY is giving me this opportunity. I look forward to hearning from you again.
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I agree with " It starts with one video, and then suddenly an hour has magically passed by. ".
Thank you for your helpful response! I would like to submit my work again.
Hi Ashley, Thank you for correcting the essay and for suggesting those additional expressions. I like reading , but I have recently been into hearing audio books too; I got a free audio edition of The Metamorphosis and heard it. Honestly, I had wanted to but a printed edition, but a huge roach was designed on the cover. Yuck! Anyway, I don't want to imagine transforming myself into a creepy bug! Authors are incredibly original. Many thanks, Kaori
Thank you for your great explanation. There are many helpful words and sentences you suggested!
Hi Ashley, Thank you for revising the essay and for suggesting those additional expressions. It's O.K. to enjoy creating and reading stories, but I'm not impressed with absurd conspiracy theories—they are hackneyed and have no creativity. If people want to make up nonsense stories, they should read Lewis Carroll and Franz Kafka in the first place. Many thanks, Kaori
Hi Ashley, Thank you for correcting this entry and for suggesting those alternative expressions. One of my goals in learning English is express my opinions precisely: I think it helps communicate with other people. Many thanks, Kaori
Thank you very much for your help.
Thank you for correcting my essay! Your suggestions were helpful, and your comment was so sweet that I gained confidence!
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Hi Ashley, Thank you for correcting the entry and for suggesting those alternative expressions. I appreciate your understanding of the situation that Japan has been put in too. I will practice writing English harder to convey my opinions to many people. Many thanks, Kaori
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