Hello! In Japan, it's an extreme heat now. I will die if my air conditioner is broken now... Your explanation was really precise and easy to understand. Thank you for your great advice!
Dear Ashley, Thank you very much for your feedback and advice on my task. I will have opportunities to introduce myself to foreign partners of my new company in the future, so your corrections would be helpful in the situation. As you mentioned, I also have had difficulties with bosses, colleagues, and work itself before, but it is good that my working situation is getting better gradually. I will work on the further tasks, following your advice. Best regards, Orange0103
Hi Ashley, Thank you for correcting my entry and for suggesting those additional expressions. I know female spiders eat their mates after they copulate. It's reasonable to get necessary nutrients in order to lay eggs, but I'm glad that I'm not a spider or a praying mantis myself—I don't want to eat my partner or don't want to be eaten! Many thanks, Kaori
Thank you for correcting my essay. Your detailed suggestions were very helpful, and I learned a lot from the alternative expressions you taught me.
Hello, Your explanation was really precise and having a point, so it was very easy to understand. I appreciate your great advice! Have a nice day!
Dear Ashley, thank you very much for the feedback. All of them were very helpful. In particular, it was interesting to know that you can say ''J&J has a tough road ahead'' but you should remove the indefinite article ''a'' if you are going to say ''J&J has tough work ahead''. These subtle differences can only be learned from a native English speaker, and I am glad IDIY is giving me this opportunity. I look forward to hearning from you again.
Thank you.
I agree with " It starts with one video, and then suddenly an hour has magically passed by. ".
Thank you for your helpful response! I would like to submit my work again.
Hi Ashley, Thank you for correcting the essay and for suggesting those additional expressions. I like reading , but I have recently been into hearing audio books too; I got a free audio edition of The Metamorphosis and heard it. Honestly, I had wanted to but a printed edition, but a huge roach was designed on the cover. Yuck! Anyway, I don't want to imagine transforming myself into a creepy bug! Authors are incredibly original. Many thanks, Kaori
Thank you for your great explanation. There are many helpful words and sentences you suggested!
Hi Ashley, Thank you for revising the essay and for suggesting those additional expressions. It's O.K. to enjoy creating and reading stories, but I'm not impressed with absurd conspiracy theories—they are hackneyed and have no creativity. If people want to make up nonsense stories, they should read Lewis Carroll and Franz Kafka in the first place. Many thanks, Kaori
Hi Ashley, Thank you for correcting this entry and for suggesting those alternative expressions. One of my goals in learning English is express my opinions precisely: I think it helps communicate with other people. Many thanks, Kaori
Thank you very much for your help.
Thank you for correcting my essay! Your suggestions were helpful, and your comment was so sweet that I gained confidence!
