Dear Ms. Florianna! It's nice of you to tell me your experience. What you told me is very helpful and reading your comment makes me have more desire to go abroad. Italy, France, Spain and Thailand , all sound great! I hope you can travel with your daughter. Thank you so much for taking the time to check my sentences. I’m glad to receive your feedback in all sentences.Your comments were so valuable for me. I am happy if we can have another session soon. Take care, Ms. Florianna!
Dear Ms.Florianna Thank you for your additional comment. Are there still any problems on your Internet access? I think less Internet access irritates users but it's no problem at all for me to wait to your reply. By the way, words order in sentences are difficult for me such as "most Japanese people today can speak English". Besides it, there are differences between similêr words for example "one" and "thing". I have to keep studying. I'd like to have your encourage through IDIY. Thank you, Ms.Florianna!
Dear Ms.Florianna! Thank you for correcting my sentences. I think how to use perfect tense is difficult for me, such as "I want to know exactly how much money I've spent". It is also difficult how to use a verb "get" , for example, "And, if I read it I sometimes get lucky!" "I sometimes get lucky!" is a simple sentence but it's more difficult than it is expected. Thanks anyway and I have to keep writing to improve my English, Ms.Florianna. Have a nice weekend, Ms.Florianna.
Thank you for your reviewing. I leant a lot. Also, the detailed explanation was beneficial. See you. Tommy,
Thank you very much for checking my English sentences. I am very happy that you read my English very carefully and profoundly.
Dear Florianna Thank you for collecting my writing.For non-native like me , writing as native does might be a long way to go.However, writing every day must be a good thing for stepping forward.Your collection and comment are so much helpful for me. I appreciate your support. Aomihime
Thank you so much for correcting my sentences in detail! Your explanations are very useful for me. I want to use "As a result," next time again.
Thanks florianna for your support to my English study. I was very satisfied with your feedback. My requests are not in a hurry. You don't need to do urgently. Please continue to teach me British English. Thanks.
I am glad that you responded my essay and gave me your opinion about war.
If my father was alive, he would be 93 years old. Someone with my late my father's name was very rare in this age because his name is an old kind of name. Thank you for your comment on my essay.
Florianna-sensei, Thank you very much for your corrections and detailed comments. Many alternatives you advised are much useful for me. I use this site only for upgrading my English, so it was not inconvenient. Yes, we are busy during Christmas. I had to play a role of Santa Claus. My elder daughter in her 13 yeas old pretends to believe in his actuality. For clarification, the only one violin school which supported Suzuki method was in my native town. The piano school with blah-blah-blah method or without any method was managed by a moody man with naturally curly hair. I disliked him. In list of books you kindly presented, I found ’The Hare with the Amber Eyes’ is the story using Japanese Netsuke as an icon! That's seems interesting. I have already ordered it on Amazon(It can't be helped to use Amazon). Though it would take a long long time for me to finish it, I will send feedback to you. Best, AK
Thank you for florianna teacher's correction. It helps me a lot and it's very clear that why I made mistakes.
Thanks for your helpful advice.
Thank you for correcting my writing!! It is very helpful to know how to express more natural in English.
Hi florianna, Thank you for your corrections. You are right. If there were someone in the rich countries to donate money for financial aids and if such people do not recognize that how important it is not to through away food a lot, I hesitate to say, but seemingly they behave hypocritically. Before that, I need to reevaluate myself again... Thank you . Tommy,
