Dear Florianna, Thank you very much for your correction and edition on my original sentences. They were very clear and became good English, I could learn a lot. This excersice is not only English but also deep thinking, logical thinking as an adult. It's very educational. Thank you very much for your comment as well, yes, I agree. When I was a child, I believed I became an adult who know everything, or understand eveything even difficult matters...ha ha ha. But, now, I am 60 year old, and I know only a little ... Everyday is studying! learning!
Thank you for your heatful comment!
Dear Florianna, thank you very much for your very precise correction on my original sentences. They bacame more natural and smooth. I learned a lot from you. "Only a nominal chance" . Oh, I never think this way of saying! thank you very much. That's very English!! Regarding facebook, just after I submitted my essay, such a pity and tragic case was happened at the Facebook company in US. I didn't think the tragidy related to the privacy leaking case, however, facebook's reputation has been scarred again. Thank you again, Florianna!
I enjoyed reading your comments about my work. Encouraging correction!
Thank you for correcting my sentences. Your corrections are pretty clear!
Teacher florianna I appreciated your lovely words, which makes me happy.
Thank you very much
Dear Florianna, thank you very much for your very pricise and accurate edit on my try. I felt very much surtisfy and fully understand your edit and comment. When I read your corrected sentences, they are very smooth and natural. I am happy to see such good correction. I did not know the usage of "be told off", this is very new for me. Thank you very much. Thank you very much again and would like to talk to you again soon.
Thank you for your reply and kind explanation. I'll keep on studying English and send my work again!
Thank you very much for your excellent proofreading.
Thank you very much for your excellent proofreading.
Thank you for your correction.
Dear Florianna, Thank you very much for your correction. I found it difficult to make sophisticated sentences... Plus, I still have problems about a/the, and singular/ plural. I'll work on these. See you soon and have a great weekend,
Dear Florianna, Hello! Thank you very much for correting my work and your warm comments. As you mentioned, I watched "Nodojiman the World " on TV.(2018 srpring) And I checked "Song for Japan" on youTube, too. It was amazing! Many Japanese have trouble to pronouce the difference between "l" and "r", when we speak English. I guess that the performers had many trouble to sing lyrics they had never pronouce before. A proverb came to my mind, "Sukikoso monono jyouzu nare". I found that there is the same one in English! "Who likes not his business, his business likes not him" It is true worldwide, isn't it? Best regard, Yoko
Dear florianna I was caring about this writing because polyamory is sensitive theme. Thank you very much for your deeply compassion. Naochan
