Thank you for your correction and comments! I haven't known the adjective 'rounded' until you taught above. I like that adjective.
Thank you for your correction and comments. They were really helpful to me.
Thank you for your correction and comments! They were really helpful to me.
Thank you for your correction, your answer and comments! I'm also glad that you enjoyed my memory with the little book! It is really a sad book, but, your idea - that the girl could have given the bear to someone else or could have given it to a charity shop, then someone could have loved and looked after the bear well - really relieved me.
Thank you for your correction, answer and comments! They were really helpful to me. Actually, I haven't tried to make wrappers of spring rolls. I think we can make the wrappers at home, as you said, and I would like to give it a try someday! It seems the point is whether I can make them thin enough to get crisp when the spring rolls are fried!
Thank you for your comments and corrections! Your correction "leaking water" made the sentence lively.
Thank you for your correction and comments! They were really helpful to me as always!
Thank you for your correction and comments! The Scottish Deer Centre sounds really exciting place, too! I found many cool and beautiful animals in the park on its online site.
Thank you for your suggestions and comments! I'll try to make sentences more natural and readable. I hope you were able to get enough refreshing sleep... Sleeping is indispensable to a good life, I think. Please take good care of yourself!
Thank you for your correction and comments! They were really helpful to me as always. Taking time for returning this to me didn't cause any inconvenience to me, so do not worry about that. I hope you enjoyed the school reunion! It's great that the reunion was held even several decades after graduation!
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Hello teacher Florianna, Thank you for your correction. My colleague and I actually went to the supermarket it takes 3 minutes on foot from my office. I could not leave the office at fixed time due to the delay of report, I got away to the shopping mall, and later, I mailed a strict customer attaching the report I finally got. Then I could finish my work． I learned that it might be unclear to say "I devoted the waiting time for shopping at high-end supermarket".. maybe I'd better say "to go to", instead of "for shipping at". And thank you so much for your warm message! It encouraged me a lot. "evoke", "lively writing", "picturing"... Before sending stars to IDIY teachers, sometimes I was sad that I didn't have good words to describe how nice their corrections and suggestions were. I am very happy that you gave me new words that I wanted to know! Thank you again and see you again :) moet
Thank you for your correction and comments! I learned a lot from you this time, too. I just listened to 'the Aquarium' from Carnival of the Animals' on YouTube. It surely is a beautiful piece! I can't come up with good adjectives to express the piece, but I really like it!
Thank you for your correction and comments! I'm sure you can enjoy making Karaage, or a version of Karaage, at home. Soy sauce and sugar, and sometimes with garlic or ginger, is very common combination in Japan. I hope you like Karaage!
Thank you for your correction and comments! They were really helpful to me. The expression of 'small'/'some' 'happiness'/'happinesses' is especially interesting - I didn't know 'happiness' could be plural because my dictionary said 'happiness' was only uncountable.
