Thank you for your correction and comments! I really enjoyed your comments as always. I like the third sentence you corrected, with the expression of 'while enjoying a waffle in a café'. That's exactly fit for what I felt; My sister and I enjoyed both planning and waffles. I didn't know that Mother's Day is in March in the UK. Thank you for telling me the custom. It's great that you and your sisters go for lunch with your mother on around Mother's Day! Yes, today(5/13) was Mother's Day in Japan. My sister and I made lunch and a dessert and gave her the presents. She looked very happy and she said she liked the presents!
Thank you for your correction. I'm sorry for late reply. Your explanation was detailed and interesting. Thank you so much!!
Dear florianna, Thank you for your correction and very useful comments! It's also really helpful that you gave me various ways to express, including an informal way. I'll try to read many sentences using 'relation' or 'relationships' to understand the connotations, though I think I could catch the outlines of them by your answer.
Dear florianna, Thanks again for your correction and comments! It's fantastic that your daughter was invited to perform at Disneyland Paris! Only a few people can experience that, I think! The third sentence you corrected is exactly what I wanted to express; I like reading the Harry Potter novels, but I haven't watched all the movies nor bought many merchandises.
Dear, Florianna. Thank you very much for correcting my work. Not only hitch-hiking but also walking late at night is dangerous in Japan now. That's true, "Safety is paramount!" Best regards, Yoko
Thank you for your correction.
I always appreciate your kind and careful check for my essay. I cheered up by your sincere massage. I will continue to make efforts to brush up my writing skill. I am sorry for submitting long essay. But I hope you to accept continuous offering my essay to you. See you again.
Your correction of "... that counts when it comes to feeling rich" is beautiful. Thank you!
Thank you for your great corrections and comments! They will be great help for me!
Dear Florianna, Thank you very much for your correction and edition on my original sentences. They were very clear and became good English, I could learn a lot. This excersice is not only English but also deep thinking, logical thinking as an adult. It's very educational. Thank you very much for your comment as well, yes, I agree. When I was a child, I believed I became an adult who know everything, or understand eveything even difficult matters...ha ha ha. But, now, I am 60 year old, and I know only a little ... Everyday is studying! learning!
Thank you for your heatful comment!
Dear Florianna, thank you very much for your very precise correction on my original sentences. They bacame more natural and smooth. I learned a lot from you. "Only a nominal chance" . Oh, I never think this way of saying! thank you very much. That's very English!! Regarding facebook, just after I submitted my essay, such a pity and tragic case was happened at the Facebook company in US. I didn't think the tragidy related to the privacy leaking case, however, facebook's reputation has been scarred again. Thank you again, Florianna!
I enjoyed reading your comments about my work. Encouraging correction!
Thank you for correcting my sentences. Your corrections are pretty clear!
Teacher florianna I appreciated your lovely words, which makes me happy.
