

Dear Kim Thank you for checking my writing. I recognized my way of expression is not simple. I will try to write simply. Best Regards. cajaroa.

Dear Kim Thank you for your advice. I studied natural and more simpler phrases. I will try to improve my expressions next time. Best regards. cajaroa

Dear Kim, Thank you for reviewing my sentences. I learned appropriate(formal, natural, clear) expressions. I check your comments, and will try to use these words. Best regards. cajaroa.

Dear Kim, Thank you for checking my grammars and explain in detail. I learned so much. Best regards. Cajaroa.

Dear Kim, Thank you for your proofreading. I learned how to use articles correctly. Thank you. Regards, Cajaroa.