Dear Mr. HelpfulBrit, Thank you very much for your comments and kind words! All of the suggestions you gave were very clear and easy to understand. Receiving your feedback motivates me to keep writing essays. Have a great start to the week. Best, Miki
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Hello, HelpfulBrit, How are you doing? I'm glad to hear from you again, which sounds you have been well. Thank you for the amendments you made on my essay. The 5th sentence * However, unfortunately their goal, perfect body, is an unrealistic one, false images which are created by using current technologies. *However, unfortunately, their goal (a perfect body) is an unrealistic one, based on false images that are created using current technologies. You added 'based on' which makes the sentence clear to understand. I like it, thank you. It's my favorite season in a year, flowers and fresh greeneries growing. I know It's gorgeous to see anemone flowers in a yard, You have purple, white and red one, that's fantastic! Yes, it's the time we can see wonderful rewards from our effort last year. The roses in my yard are almost ready to bloom, they are pale orange, bright pink, and purple. See you next time, Yoko
Thank you for your feedback. As always, your detailed explanations were easy to follow, and the alternative sentences you offered me were very useful. I love your teaching style!
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Thank you so much for your kind comments. They are very insightful, easy to understand as ones last time.
Thank you so much for your kind and very detailed explanations and suggestions!
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Thank you for your correction! I am very glad to receive your encouraging message. I will try to study English more.
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