Dear Maryanne, Thank you very much for correcting my writing! I understand your point about the order of the sentences. I look forward to learning more from you! Best regareds, Sae
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Thank your for your comment with useful guidance how I can use more appropriate wordings for this topic!
Thank you for correcting my essay. Your suggestions helped me expand my vocabulary. In particular, I did not know the difference between “college” and “university.” Thanks again!
Maryanne san Let me express my gratitude for your informative corrections and a lot of pieces of kind advice. First, you extend alternatives, which are very useful for me to learn how natives express their thoughts or feelings. Second, you kindly write the meaning of words you used in your explanations, which is like an English-English dictionary. This "dictionary" is worth calling "the unbeatable weapon." Third, you show me the systematic grammatical knowledge, such as many categories of determiners. Fourth, besides these linguistic lessons, you tell me how to construct persuasive paragraphs, not sentences, such as "The reader is looking for closure." Therefore, I state from here, consequently, I can learn English in the circumstances as if I were in the U.S. although I'm in Japan in real. I'd like to thank you again. Best regards, ie1133
Maryanne san I appreciate your correct and kind understandings to what I meant to say. You have been kindly extending a thoughtful attitude to my composition, which has encouraged me. Let me review my logical flow. Food security issue is realistic in Japan too. But this is because Japan relys too much on imported foods, not because of lack of water. There is plenty of water in Japan. Hydroelectric plants can generate enough electricity for the minimum amount necessary consumed in Japan. Alternatively, the biggest challenge for Japan in coming 20 years will be the reduced
Thank you so much for all corrections and encouragement! The message you explained makes senses to me. Thanks again :)
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Thank you for correcting my essay and encouraging me! Your explanations were easy to understand and helpful. I will try to compose essays using few words.
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Dear Maryanne Thank you for your heartwarming message! Have a wonderful day!!
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Thank you very much for your kind message and sorry for my late reply. It’s been five months!
Dear Maryanne Thank you for your kind message! Have a wonderful day!!
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