Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. The idea of giving back to society later in life the benefits ones receive from society when they are young, should be spread to increase good deeds. There are still a lot of poverty and tragedies around the globe. Thus, everyone should donate some part of their wealth to create better world for future generations. I also will continue donating 1% of my annual income for better future. Best regards, 5971mak
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Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that develop the content logically. I will brush up my writting skill as you instruct in today's essay. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Kanazawa City has been working to promote sports by formulating the Kanazawa Citizens' Sports Promotion Plan in March 2005, as they proposed the basic principles of "enhancing the lifelong sports lives of its citizens" and "realizing a lifelong sports society" so that citizens can enjoy sports anytime, anywhere, and forever. In particularly, having a good health has become essential to be productive in our society that is rapidly aging. The Great Noto Earthquake devasteted a wide region of our Noto peninsulae, sports events are one of the critical activities for revitalizing. Through sports activities, they can have a funtime and more economic activities while opening street eatery stands around venues. As a result, more residents can manufacture the bonds among residents in affected areas and people living in remote places, resulting more hope in their challenging time. I believe that the power of hope can help the struggles overcome a lot of difficulties with aids and supports from those who are in other places. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
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Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
