Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you always your sophisticated correction suggestions. Now I noticed this evaluation section after more than 150 writing practice sessions and I've found a way to show you my appreciation. I felt a little embarassed about my slow progress in English writing, but I want to at least continue. Have a nice day, too. Best regards, Mai,
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you for your review. You helped make my sentences more natural.
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. As you mentioned high salt intake in Japanese cuisine, we have soy sauce, salted squid"shiokara", miso soup, and salted vegetables that are preferences for many Japanese. Since these dishes are served from childhood, many Japanese become addicted to salty taste without knowing it. It is said that Japanese salty dishes may cause salt addiction to many people. To decrease the level of individual's blood pressure, the Japanese government has proceeded pubic education for salt reduction in the last four decades. Thanks to the intervention, the average of daily salt consumption gradually declined from 15g/day 40 years ago to 11 g/dl in these days. However, there are many still addicts in northern part of Japan where salty products are local specialties. The government should exhort companies to label warnings on the salty food products that contain a lot of salt as it mentions "not to eat too much for good health" and " having small amount to enjoy longer". Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. As for the unemployment situation in Japan, I'm not optimistic about it. Since the Japan's economy has stagnated, many companies relocated their factories abroad that diminish a lot of factory workers' jobs. In addition, as our society has been aging and shrinking, domestic consumption declined and many businessess moved their offices overseas to raise sales amount. Naturally, if office workers hope to continue working in their companies, it is mandate for them to work well in foreign countries. However, many workers are not good at speaking English and familiar with diversity. The circumstances surrounding corporations are the same as before, so many newcomers have difficulty in doing their tasks. Due to facing these conditions, some of the young choose entrepreneuer who become a company with only one president. Furthermore, since some of the young are hesitate to communicating with face-to-face, this factor accelerates such lonely bosses nowadays. But it's still a good case for them to make profits, and in many cases, due to lack of experience, they frequently go bankrupt. This condition seems to increase the number of reclusives in Japan as well. After they experienced a variety of setbacks, a small number of them can start working again but their jobs are mainly simple job workers such as a percel delivery person, a convenience store clerk, a taxi driver, and so on. The remains continue staying at home in their room with the internet while refraining from social interaction. In my opinion, it is the most important thing for them to find what they want to pursue and accomplish in their lives before they graduate schools. I believe that such motivation can help them hone skills and develop their unique advantages. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I understood that "hobby" is a tricky word that needs replacing with "pastime", "activities", and "preferences". Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Hello SaraRoseNY, Very nice! I like your English writing. You read between the lines and make it into a beautiful sentence, thank you. You used a funny English word, 'per se'. It doesn't look like an English word, it's peculiar English word. I found the meaning of it, that is , "used to say that something is being considered alone, apart from anything else" I want to use it in my essay. See you the next time, Yoko
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I will review your correction in detail to brush up my writting. Thank you very much. Best regards, 5971mak
