Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for proofreading my writing. I truly enjoyed reading the revised version and your explanations. The summary terms are really helpful to write concise sentences. The "conclusion first" format is important, but I tend to forget it. I'll write another journal soon. Have a great weekend. Best regards, Mkawa
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Automated voice by AI on the New York times has become difficult to distinguish from human voices. When the AI is going to start reading articles, the beginning of narrations mentions that voices are read by the machines. Thus, I can know that sounds are imitation voice. If reading starts without the introduction, I may feel that the voices are human reading. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Daily convenience in our life is difficult to stop utilizing such as motor vehicles and clean elegant buildings. To change our thoughts and mindsets, clear future images are important to change our daily behaviors. Like Earth simulator, visible scientific forecast of ongoing civilized society can help them accept a sustainable life which consists of less fossil fuel consumption and green society. Authorities and institutions should display how the waste of natural resources could harm our environment. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
HI, SaraRoseNY How have you been? I think your comment sounds like you have been doing well. I have just come back to this study, and you are the first teacher I asked for checking. I like your sentences, because they are very logical, and mean exactly what I tried to say. Thank you so much. Especially, I like this: 'Applicants for a driver’s license should be examined under strictly set criteria, regardless of where they are originally from.' See you next time Take care Yoko
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Major cities and small towns have each advantage, respectably. So each individuals may choose favorite places to live by themselves. No matter where you live, the grass is always greener on the other side. As for "fun time", the phrase is educational for me to learn nuance of it. I would like to deepen my understanding of the differences in meaning between similar words and phrases. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. As for the differences between happy and fun, I understand the difference between them as follows by reviewing my grammar textbook and dictionary. Happy describes an emotional state and is often used to describe a person's feelings. So "happy and time in a sentence" emphasize a person's emotional movements in conversation. On the other hand, "a fun time" is commonly used to mean that someone had a good time with friends, family, and others. It signifies showing empathy with their friends and families. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections and instructions to my wrong usage of phrases. I reviewed about your advices and understand how to use the phrases correctly. Best regards, 5971mak （Examples for usage of happy with time） I am happy to have the time off. I was happy at that time. I was very happy at that time. But you can't be happy all the time. （Examples for usage of a fun time） That was a very fun time. I had a fun time with him. We have a fun time.
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. The importance of ability-based education was explicit when the Japanese government tried to introduce official English proficiency tests into National Center Test for University Admissions (basic academic evaluation examination). Due to expansion of globalization, the government once decided to do so, but some critiques argued that the implimentation of the exam was unfair for those who live in countryside areas. The students of city dwellers families would have better access to have more English education, so the exam was harshly criticized to widen the disparity among students. They strongly insisted that all students were endowed with the same contents of education. They said education should not segregate students. As a result, the elevation of the critics defeated the government's decision and the implementation was cancelled. When I heard the government gave up it, I was uttered because such idea was truely foolish and one-sided view. Given the importance of English proficiency in current globalized world, the official English proficiency tests should be placed as one of the essentials for learners. If the tests were implemented in National Center Test for University Admissions (basic academic evaluation examination), university students' English proficiency would be clearly raised and students would have easier access to the world for studying and working. I believe that the same contents of education damage students performance and harm development of society. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. In addition to the new condition that makes us think normal, products price would be a serious concern to us. Due to devaluation of a weak Yen, our import-reliant society would face price hikes. Rather than raising the price, I think many people would accept the simple packages. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you for your feedback. I also apologize for my late reply. I did not have time as I went on a trip to Nikko, where World Heritage temples and shrines. As always, your detailed explanations were easy to follow, and the alternative sentences you offered me were very useful!
